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Re: If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island [#permalink]
06 Apr 2012, 07:15
if i were, and parallel construction. C
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Re: If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island [#permalink]
06 Apr 2012, 09:10
Subjunctive "were" is appropriate here. So A, B and E are out. Dont just rule out D because it uses a continuous "relaxing" that doesnt seem to be parallel with eat, buff and watch. In many cases, use of continuous tense among simple presents can be correct.
Pay close attention to whether the continuous tense adds new activity in the list or simply modifies the earlier written activity. For instance "I ate my hamburger and watched TV" - lists two activities. Now consider "I ate my hamburger, watching TV" - Still two activities but the latter acts as a modifier and not just another activity. Therefore, pay attention to whether the author means that Crusoe ate dates and meat while relaxing in a recliner or that the Crusoe ate date and meat and also relaxed in a recliner.
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Re: If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island [#permalink]
06 Apr 2012, 20:30
neeshpal wrote: If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, buff his palm-plank surfboard with carnauba palm wax and watch a palm-fringed sunset.
(A) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, (B) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relaxing in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, (C) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe were marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, (D) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe were marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relaxing in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, (E) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, to relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, Again i got it wrong...i should have thought of this subjunctive mood type questions.... the answer is rightfully C
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Re: If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island [#permalink]
07 Apr 2012, 00:37
please explain subjunctive mood. I chosed A. Tell me why option A, B and E are eliminated
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Re: If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island [#permalink]
07 Apr 2012, 07:38
Answer is C... 1. If... were construction. 2. parallelism Eat, Relax, Buff..
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Re: If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island [#permalink]
09 Apr 2012, 14:05
Why can't it be D? Because of parallelism or is it something else?
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Re: If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island [#permalink]
09 Apr 2013, 05:31
If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, buff his palm-plank surfboard with carnauba palm wax and watch a palm-fringed sunset.
(A) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, "was" is wrong as it is a subjunctive mood, so were should be used (B) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relaxing in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, "was" is wrong as it is a subjunctive mood,so were should be used. "relaxing" breaks parallelism (C) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe were marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, mood and parallelism looks fine (D) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe were marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relaxing in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, "relaxing" breaks parallelism (E) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, to relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, "was" is wrong as it is a subjunctive mood, so were should be used. "to relax" breaks parallelism
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Re: If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island [#permalink]
09 Apr 2013, 09:17
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Correct me if I'm wrong, but the GMAT always uses oxford comma. C is the best answer here, but is lacking the oxford comma. What's the source of this question?
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Re: If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island [#permalink]
09 Apr 2013, 14:28
In unreal condition, the past tense form of verb be is always WERE. It can NEVER be was. If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, buff his palm-plank surfboard with carnauba palm wax and watch a palm-fringed sunset. (A) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, >>>> WRONG(B) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relaxing in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, >>>> WRONG(C) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe were marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, >>>> CORRECT(D) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe were marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, relaxing in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, >>>> WRONG(E) If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island with an eclectic mix of palms, he could eat dates and coconut meat, to relax in a palm recliner in his palm-post bungalow under a palm-thatch roof, >>>> WRONGHope it helps.
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Re: If a latter-day Robinson Crusoe was marooned on an island [#permalink]
10 Apr 2013, 11:39
@nimisha - yes ur right about the use of a list. . But reread the list. it does have an 'AND' .. the list is " he could eat...., relax...., buff.... AND watch....." Posted from my mobile device
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