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If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it increases the likelihood that the impact of a single crop disease or pest will be disastrous.

(A) If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it
(B) If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, as is fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it
(C) A practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, a single strain of plant used for a given crop over a wide area
(D) A single strain of plant used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods,
(E) The use of a single strain of plant for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods,


The OFFICIAL EXPLANATION:

• Choice A is faulty because the pronoun it and the appositive a practice each lack a noun referent.
• Nor are there logical referents in choice B for as is and it.
• Choice C entails a false appositive: the sentence now says that the single strain of plant
is itself a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, not that the use of a
single strain is such a practice.
• Choice D reverses the order of the constructions, but the appositive remains illogical.
• Choice E is the best answer: use is the proper subject for the verb increases
and [is also] a governing noun for the appositive practice.

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(1)
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• What is an appositive? Please give an example that is similar to the one in this question.

• In this question, what is the appositive, and what is or should be its noun?


(2) The OE states, "Choice A is faulty because the pronoun it and the appositive a practice each lack a noun referent."
ANSWERED ALREADY in THIS POST
• Why did I put a word in red typeface? Be specific. Shorthand for a rule doesn't help those who don't know the rule.

• What does the author of the OE mean when (s)he writes that the pronoun it and the appositive lack a noun referent?


(3)The OE states, "Nor are there logical referents in choice B for as is and it."

• If there were logical referents, what would they or it be?

• As a subject, this phrasing works: If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area.
However, this similar phrasing does not work as a subject: A practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods. Explain why.


(4) In plain English
• What does the phrase "a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods" mean?

You don't have to Google anything. In fact, please don't.
In context, what does "modern seed-marketing methods" refer to?

• What is the relationship between "methods" and "practice"?

(5) The OE states, "Choice C entails a false appositive: the sentence now says that the single strain of plant
is itself a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, not that the use of a
single strain is such a practice."

• Rewrite this explanation in plainer English that spells out details.

The OE states, "Choice D reverses the order of the constructions, but the appositive remains illogical."
• What "constructions" does D reverse, and why is the appositive illogical?


(6) Distillation of meaning. (Look up "distillation" if it is unfamiliar. It may be for many. Great word.)

• What is the connection between (a) the appositive and the subject, and (b) the appositive and the result?

HINT: Why would farmers be inclined to court disaster?
HINT: There are "bad guys" in the picture. Who or what are they?

• Given these connections, what, in plain English, does this sentence mean?
Pretend I am not an agrarian expert. Pretend I look like this :sleep: or this :dazed
when you use words whose meanings are not self-evident.
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• What is an appositive? Please give an example that is similar to the one in this question.

• In this question, what is the appositive, and what is or should be its noun?


(2) The OE states, "Choice A is faulty because the pronoun it and the appositive a practice each lack a noun referent."

• Why did I put a word in red typeface? Be specific. Shorthand for a rule doesn't help those who don't know the rule.

• What does the author of the OE mean when (s)he writes that the pronoun it and the appositive lack a noun referent?




(1)
• an appositive is a noun or noun phrase that can be used to modify or to give details of another close-by noun.
E.g. Frightened mouse ,black in colour, is chased by cat. Here Black in colour is appositive
• In this Question the appositive is "a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods" and it is referring to a plant which is wrong because a practice cannot be plant.

(2)
• There is no Antecedent for the pronoun it , even if pronoun It refer backs to the Single Strain or the plant , meaning is ambiguous. Similarly the appositive should modify or give details of some noun and it is not making sense with either single strain or plant. That is the reason you used the word lack.
• Author means there is no referent for both and need a clear noun referent. Hence option a is incorrect
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Quote:
(1)
• What is an appositive? Please give an example that is similar to the one in this question.
• In this question, what is the appositive, and what is or should be its noun?

(2) The OE states, "Choice A is faulty because the pronoun it and the appositive a practice each lack a noun referent."
• Why did I put a word in red typeface? Be specific. Shorthand for a rule doesn't help those who don't know the rule.
• What does the author of the OE mean when (s)he writes that the pronoun it and the appositive lack a noun referent?

(1)
• an appositive is a noun or noun phrase that can be used to modify or to give details of another close-by noun.
E.g. Frightened mouse ,black in colour, is chased by cat. Here Black in colour is appositive
• In this Question the appositive is "a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods" and it is referring to a plant which is wrong because a practice cannot be plant.

(2)
• There is no Antecedent for the pronoun it , even if pronoun It refer backs to the Single Strain or the plant , meaning is ambiguous. Similarly the appositive should modify or give details of some noun and it is not making sense with either single strain or plant. That is the reason you used the word lack.
• Author means there is no referent for both and need a clear noun referent. Hence option a is incorrect

soapbolt - nice work!

You correctly highlight two facts about appositives:
1) all appositives give us extra information about the noun they modify (the frightened mouse is black in color)
2) appositives vary in length
-- your example was a short phrase
-- the appositive in the question is fairly long
-- appositives can be one word: My friend, Aarav, hopes to become a writer.

P.S. Appositives can be essential and non-essential.
For an excellent post about appositives, please see mikemcgarry in THIS post on GMAT Club.

I will rephrase my confusing question.
Question: Although there is no suitable candidate in option A, to what [kind of] noun or pronoun should the
appositive refer?
Answer: To a noun like the one in option E, because a practice is synonymous with the use of.

Regarding the OE, "the pronoun it and the appositive a practice each lack a noun referent" . . .
. . . as you note, no antecedent makes sense as an antecedent of "practice" or "it."

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The underlined phrase is actually using IF, which is incorrect.

Look at the verb ''increases'', this verb has no subject yet, so we need to find a subject for this verb.

Be careful, we don't know what ''it'' modifies for, so we can eliminate A, B.

Answer C and D contain 2 subjects '' a practice '', ''a single strain'', so the verb ''increases'' doesn't have a correct subject yet, that's why C&D out.

Answer E uses the subject ''the use of a single strain'' ... ''increases'' --> this is correct. ''a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods'' modifies for the whole phrase '' The use of a single strain of plant for a given crop over a wide area ''.

So E is correct.
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Project SC Butler: Day 19 Sentence Correction (SC1)



If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it increases the likelihood that the impact of a single crop disease or pest will be disastrous.

(A) If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it

(B) If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, as is fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it

(C) A practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, a single strain of plant used for a given crop over a wide area

(D) A single strain of plant used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods,

(E) The use of a single strain of plant for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods,

OFFICIAL EXPLANATION

• Choice A is faulty because the pronoun it and the appositive a practice each lack a noun referent.

• Nor are there logical referents in choice B for as is and it.

• Choice C entails a false appositive: the sentence now says that the single strain of plant
is itself a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, not that the use of a
single strain is such a practice.

• Choice D reverses the order of the constructions, but the appositive remains illogical.

• Choice E is the best answer: use is the proper subject for the verb increases
and [is also] a governing noun for the appositive practice.


I chose the correct answer based on the meaning- the use of strain increases...

Appositive modifiers-

1. The plover gets its food by cleaning the mouth of the crocodile, a reptile that could eat the bird at any time - here reptile (appositive) modifies crocodile. This is a concrete appositive
2. The plover gets its food by cleaning the mouth of the crocodile, a relationship that benefits both animals - here relationship (appositive) refers to the entire preceding clause. This is an abstract appositive

But as per OE, "Choice A is faulty because the pronoun it and the appositive a practice each lack a noun referent."
Do we ALWAYS need a noun referent for an appositive ?
Because I have read that appositive can either describe a preceding noun(Concrete appositive) or modify the whole idea of the preceding clause(Abstract appositive).

AjiteshArun , GMATNinja , MagooshExpert , GMATGuruNY , VeritasKarishma , VeritasPrepBrian , MartyMurray , ccooley, RonPurewal , DmitryFarber other experts - please enlighten
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generis wrote:
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Project SC Butler: Day 19 Sentence Correction (SC1)



If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it increases the likelihood that the impact of a single crop disease or pest will be disastrous.

(A) If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it

(B) If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, as is fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it

(C) A practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, a single strain of plant used for a given crop over a wide area

(D) A single strain of plant used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods,

(E) The use of a single strain of plant for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods,

OFFICIAL EXPLANATION

• Choice A is faulty because the pronoun it and the appositive a practice each lack a noun referent.

• Nor are there logical referents in choice B for as is and it.

• Choice C entails a false appositive: the sentence now says that the single strain of plant
is itself a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, not that the use of a
single strain is such a practice.

• Choice D reverses the order of the constructions, but the appositive remains illogical.

• Choice E is the best answer: use is the proper subject for the verb increases
and [is also] a governing noun for the appositive practice.


I chose the correct answer based on the meaning- the use of strain increases...

Appositive modifiers-

1. The plover gets its food by cleaning the mouth of the crocodile, a reptile that could eat the bird at any time - here reptile (appositive) modifies crocodile. This is a concrete appositive
2. The plover gets its food by cleaning the mouth of the crocodile, a relationship that benefits both animals - here relationship (appositive) refers to the entire preceding clause. This is an abstract appositive

But as per OE, "Choice A is faulty because the pronoun it and the appositive a practice each lack a noun referent."
Do we ALWAYS need a noun referent for an appositive ?
Because I have read that appositive can either describe a preceding noun(Concrete appositive) or modify the whole idea of the preceding clause(Abstract appositive).


Whether we consider the phrase in A a phrase that modifies the preceding clause or an appositive that should modify a single noun, clearly the structure you have brought up is acceptable.

In other words, I believe that the following makes sense:

A single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods.

However, in A, we have "if". So the beginning of A is not a statement, but rather, a condition. So, perhaps the issue with the modifier in A is that it is not in apposition to a statement. Let's consider another example.

The number of women attending law school is increasing every year, a trend that bodes well for the coffers of law schools.

OK, that makes sense. The closing phrase modifies the preceding statement.

What about this?

If the number of women attending law school is increasing every year, a trend that bodes well for the coffers of law schools, then ...

The beginning of the sentence does not actually state that there is such a trend. So, my take is that the use of the modifying phrase does not make sense.

By the way, my understanding is that the people who write OEs are not the people who write questions. So, it could be that the person who wrote that OE did not really understand what the issue is.
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If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it increases the likelihood that the impact of a single crop disease or pest will be disastrous.

(A) If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it
(B) If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, as is fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it
(C) A practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, a single strain of plant used for a given crop over a wide area
(D) A single strain of plant used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods,
(E) The use of a single strain of plant for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods,



Quote:
(6) Distillation of meaning. (Look up "distillation" if it is unfamiliar. It may be for many. Great word.)

• What is the connection between (a) the appositive and the subject, and (b) the appositive and the result?

HINT: Why would farmers be inclined to court disaster?
HINT: There are "bad guys" in the picture. Who or what are they?

• Given these connections, what, in plain English, does this sentence mean?
Pretend I am not an agrarian expert. Pretend I look like this :sleep: or this :dazed
when you use words whose meanings are not self-evident.



Here is the meaning of the sentence. The sentence talks about a practice or a process that is encouraged by modern seed-marketing methods. The practice = using a single strain of plant for any crop over a vast area. The sentence then presents the effect or a drawback of this practice. This practice increases the chances that the effect of the single crop disease or pest will be devastating.


Hope this helps. :-)
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between D&E there are no confusions regarding the noun modifier imo, "a practice" clearly modifies the whole clause described before it.

The issue is that in D, while not incomprehensible, "used for a given crop" can be mistaken as modifier, and the sentence is read as "a single strain of plant.... increases..."

This is improved by E
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That interpretation of D wouldn't be a mistake. "Used for a given crop" is a modifier, creating the exact subject-verb problem you describe. "Used" can't be the verb for "a single strain," since the strain can't use anything. Also, if the strain is not being used, then "used" has no object at all and we have two verbs in a row! Our sentence core would then be "A strain used increases the likelihood."
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If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it increases the likelihood that the impact of a single crop disease or pest will be disastrous.

(A) If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it

(B) If a single strain of plant is used for a given crop over a wide area, as is fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, it

(C) A practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods, a single strain of plant used for a given crop over a wide area

(D) A single strain of plant used for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods,

(E) The use of a single strain of plant for a given crop over a wide area, a practice fostered by modern seed-marketing methods,


Can someone please specify how this question tests SVA?
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Can someone please specify how this question tests SVA?

This question barely tests subject-verb agreement.

The only aspect of it that's clearly related to subject-verb agreement is that, in the correct version, the plural "methods" appears right before the main verb "increases," which is singular. So, if a test-taker were to perceive the plural "methods" to be the subject of "increases," the sentence could appear to have a subject-verb agreement issue.
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