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In addition to her work on the miocene homicide fosiil [#permalink] New post 18 Dec 2007, 12:44
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In addition to her work on the miocene homicide fosiil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaelogy with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting East African paintings.

(A) Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
(B) Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and by painstakingly documenting
(C) Leakey was a contributor to archaelogy with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of
(D) Leakey's contributions to archaelogy include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of
(E) Leakey's contributions to archaelogy include her discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of
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Re: SC - Leakey / Leakey's [#permalink] New post 19 Dec 2007, 04:13
[quote="gregspirited"]In addition to her work on the miocene homicide fosiil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaelogy with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting East African paintings.

(A) Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
(B) Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and by painstakingly documenting
(C) Leakey was a contributor to archaelogy with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of
(D) Leakey's contributions to archaelogy include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of
(E) Leakey's contributions to archaelogy include her discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of

The answer must be B. The form is "by...and by...."
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 [#permalink] New post 19 Dec 2007, 06:16
In addition to her work on the miocene homicide fosiil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaelogy with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting East African paintings.

(A) Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
(B) Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and by painstakingly documenting
(C) Leakey was a contributor to archaelogy with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of
(D) Leakey's contributions to archaelogy include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of
(E) Leakey's contributions to archaelogy include her discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of

Here's my analysis to get answer choice D:

A. "her discovery of X and painstakingly documenting Y" not parallel
B. "her discovery of X and painstakingly documenting Y" not parallel
C. parallel, but first part list another comtribution and "was a contibutor" then seems awk.
D. correct
E. "her discovering X and painstaking documentation Y" not parallel
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OA is D [#permalink] New post 19 Dec 2007, 08:10
I just checked on SocreTop. The OA is D.
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Re: SC - Leakey / Leakey's [#permalink] New post 20 Dec 2007, 23:58
gregspirited wrote:
In addition to her work on the miocene homicide fosiil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaelogy with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting East African paintings.

(A) Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
(B) Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and by painstakingly documenting
(C) Leakey was a contributor to archaelogy with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of
(D) Leakey's contributions to archaelogy include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of
(E) Leakey's contributions to archaelogy include her discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of


OA is not D, I have seen this before and D and E are not correct.

what does Her refer to in D and E if its "Mary Leakey's"???
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Re: SC - Leakey / Leakey's [#permalink] New post 22 Dec 2007, 19:43
gregspirited wrote:
In addition to her work on the miocene homicide fosiil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaelogy with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting East African paintings.

(A) Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
(B) Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and by painstakingly documenting
(C) Leakey was a contributor to archaelogy with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of
(D) Leakey's contributions to archaelogy include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of
(E) Leakey's contributions to archaelogy include her discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of


Work should be compared with other contribution for correct comparison.

Therefore either it's D or E.
E is wrong, discovering is wrong tense and is not clear about who did the documentation.

The correct answer is "D"
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 [#permalink] New post 22 Dec 2007, 20:07
yeah i don't think the OA of D is correct...how can you compare 'her' and 'Leakey's work'...
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 [#permalink] New post 22 Dec 2007, 20:35
gowani wrote:
yeah i don't think the OA of D is correct...how can you compare 'her' and 'Leakey's work'...


"her work" is compared with "her contributions"

No where her is compared with her contribution.
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