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In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through [#permalink] New post 22 Apr 2008, 06:31
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In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through all the steps needed to produce several different kinds of steel, processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain economically viable.

(A) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain

(B) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(C) the processing of steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(D) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remain

(E) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remained
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 22 Apr 2008, 06:39
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E - || large plants... small mills, have been... (have) remained
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 22 Apr 2008, 06:52
I think is D.
Here it is suggested that they are still economically viable, especially that the first sentence uses present tense. "In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through all the steps needed to produce several different kinds of steel, small mills have been able to put capital into new technology and remain economically viable
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 22 Apr 2008, 06:53
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In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through all the steps needed to produce several different kinds of steel, processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain economically viable.


(A) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain

(B) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(C) the processing of steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(D) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remain

(E) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remained


eliminate b enabled does not agree with remaining
eliminate c enabled does not agree with remaining
eliminate d comparison not parallel should be "large plants that take" to "small mills (insert verb)"
eliminate e "remained" is in the past tense

A
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 22 Apr 2008, 07:48
I amend my answer to D. Ya should be ll.
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 22 Apr 2008, 09:36
immediately narrow it down to D or E due to comparison required btwn large mills and small mills. Out of those two, D is better/
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 22 Apr 2008, 21:41
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D works. Incorrect comparison in ABC and incorrect tense in E.
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In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through all the steps needed to produce several different kinds of steel, processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain economically viable.

(A) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain

(B) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(C) the processing of steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining


(D) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remain


(E) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remained
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 23 Apr 2008, 04:42
at first i thought of D, but then i chose E because
have enabled ... and (have) remained...
--> so we should choose because of meaning or because if there is similar case, we cannot omit the verb have?

now i think D is more correct, but anyone can help to explain the above? need to clear my basics. thanks
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 24 Apr 2008, 12:32
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D)small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remain
Option D has || and to put and to remain are also||(second to is not necessary) so E cannot be correct.
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 24 Apr 2008, 13:05
D it is.

Present tense "remain" in D is needed as the steel mills still are economically viable
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 24 Apr 2008, 13:55
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Sentence has parallel comparison issue: In contrast to X, Y
Eliminate A, B and C


Parallel Issue – to put … and remain – eliminate E

(A) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain

(B) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(C) the processing of steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(D) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remain

(E) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remained

Answer: D
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 24 Apr 2008, 14:37
thanks, i overlooked :oops:
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 13 Sep 2010, 07:07
that take....to put.... remain.. D
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 24 Sep 2011, 07:46
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In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through all the steps needed to produce several different kinds of steel, processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain economically viable.


(A) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain

(B) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(C) the processing of steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(D) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remain

(E) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remained


eliminate b enabled does not agree with remaining
eliminate c enabled does not agree with remaining
eliminate d comparison not parallel should be "large plants that take" to "small mills (insert verb)"
eliminate e "remained" is in the past tense

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In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through all the steps needed to produce several different kinds of steel, small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and (have) remained economically viable.

Can we not have " have" omitted here? In that case, "E" will be OK.
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In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through all the steps needed to produce several different kinds of steel, small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and (have) remained economically viable.

Can we not have " have" omitted here? In that case, "E" will be OK.


You can see the breakage of structural //ism in the colored part. If E has to be chosen as structurally and logically //, the correct version should be -- “have been able to put capital into new technology and (have) been able to remain economically viable. Instead we have passive voice on one side and active voice on the other. That is the reason D is better
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 24 Sep 2011, 09:01
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In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through all the steps needed to produce several different kinds of steel, small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and (have) remained economically viable.

Can we not have " have" omitted here? In that case, "E" will be OK.


You can see the breakage of structural //ism in the colored part. If E has to be chosen as structurally and logically //, the correct version should be -- “have been able to put capital into new technology and (have) been able to remain economically viable. Instead we have passive voice on one side and active voice on the other. That is the reason D is better


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But not completely clear about voice part. I think both part are in active voice.
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 30 Sep 2011, 09:37
prasannar wrote:
In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through all the steps needed to produce several different kinds of steel, processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain economically viable.

(A) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain

(B) processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(C) the processing of steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(D) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remain

(E) small mills, by processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remained


Splits-
1) modifier and comparison
"In contrast to large steel plants" we need small mills
So (A), (B) and (C) are out.

2) remain/remained
We should use "remain" because "small mills have been able to put capital into new technology" (present tense)
So (E) is out.

(D) wins.
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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 18 Jan 2014, 10:53
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E - || large plants... small mills, have been... (have) remained



Ans. D - || large plants... small mills, have been able to... remain

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Re: SC:Steel plant [#permalink] New post 16 Feb 2014, 12:02
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that take....to put.... remain.. D


that take....to put.... remain..

How are they Parallel?
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