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In its most recent approach, the comet Crommelin passed the Earth at about the same distance and in about the same position, some 25 degrees above the horizon, that Halley’s comet will pass the next time it appears.

(A) that Halley’s comet will pass
(B) that Halley’s comet is to be passing
(C) as Halley’s comet
(D) as will Halley’s comet
(E) as Halley’s comet will do

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mundasingh123 wrote:
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D for me .
I think this is a case of Ellipsis.

Hi can someone explain the concept of ellipsis?


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Hey All,

I got asked to take this one on by PM, so here I am!

In its most recent approach, the comet Crommelin passed the Earth at about the same distance and in about the same position, some 25 degrees above the horizon, that Halley’s comet will pass the next time it appears.

This is a comparison question, so you have to make sure you're comparing the right two thing.

(A) that Halley’s comet will pass
PROBLEM: This would lead us to think that Halley's comet will pass the distance and position that Crommelin did. That isn't right. It should be PASSING at the distance and position that Crommelin did.

(B) that Halley’s comet is to be passing
PROBLEM: Same as above, "is to be passing" is not a correct construction. Just gibberish, really.

(C) as Halley’s comet
PROBLEM: You can't use "as" without a clause, and there's no verb after the comma in this choice.

(D) as will Halley’s comet
ANSWER: Now we have a verb, so "as" is correct. It's also now clear that we're comparing CLAUSES (the ACT of passing).

(E) as Halley’s comet will do
PROBLEM: "do" is trying to stand in for the verb "to pass" (because that's the action we're comparing: passing), which doesn't make any sense. You can't say "will do pass," but you can say "will pass" (which is why D is correct).

Hope that makes sense!

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saravalli wrote:
In its most recent approach, the comet Crommelin passed the Earth at about the same distance and in about the same position, some 25 degrees above the horizon, that Halley’s comet will pass the next time it appears.

(A) that Halley’s comet will pass
(B) that Halley’s comet is to be passing
(C) as Halley’s comet
(D) as will Halley’s comet
(E) as Halley’s comet will do

plz expln rule/concept if possible. :-D Thanks


i think E is best..

E creates the right comparison and tense structure..


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i think its A. In 'E', I am not comfortable with that 'will do' piece at the end there. ..


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I go with A.

C, D, and E all start with 'as' and create an improper comparison.

the comet Crommelin passed the Earth at about the same distance and in about the same position, as ....

The comet passed at the same degree an position as Halley's comet.

This compares the path of the Crommelin to Halley's comet.

'is to be passing' is clearly wrong in B.


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D for me .
I think this is a case of Ellipsis.


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saravalli wrote:
In its most recent approach, the comet Crommelin passed the Earth at about the same distance and in about the same position, some 25 degrees above the horizon, that Halley’s comet will pass the next time it appears.

(A) that Halley’s comet will pass
(B) that Halley’s comet is to be passing
(C) as Halley’s comet
(D) as will Halley’s comet
(E) as Halley’s comet will do

plz expln rule/concept if possible. :-D Thanks


My sentence rewrite:

The comet Crommelin passed the Earth at about the same distance and in about the same position that Halley’s comet will pass the next time it appears.

(A) that Halley’s comet will pass
(B) that Halley’s comet is to be passing
(C) as Halley’s comet (missing future tense)
(D) as will Halley’s comet
(E) as Halley’s comet will do


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E for me too.
will do in the end cleary singnals that Hally's comet will actually pass the earth in the same position etc..it emphasis on the action.
As is used correct here it signals similarilty between crom's comet and halley's comet. That both use the same path. Anyways what the OA?


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marshpa wrote:
E for me too.
will do in the end cleary singnals that Hally's comet will actually pass the earth in the same position etc..it emphasis on the action.
As is used correct here it signals similarilty between crom's comet and halley's comet. That both use the same path. Anyways what the OA?


Take the BS out and you get:
(E)The Crommelin comet passed at the same position as Halley's comet will do.
(A)The Crommelin comet passed at the same position that Halley's comet will pass.


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I will go with E .

A is wrong due to

- Same that ,it should be same as
- that refers to position whereas we have to refer both position and distance


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Mighty convoluted +1 for the question.

I pick D for ellipsis.

Same position as will Halley's comet sounds better than
same position that Halley's comet will pass.

Although it could well be A .... :oops:

About time the OA comes out.


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I say D too.


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after re-reading this..

I think D might be passed..

E actually creates the wrong tense structure..

Comet PASSED the earth at about the same blah, as will Haley's Comet..

using DO in E..clashes with the past tense of PASSED..


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:-D Thankyou. OA is D.


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i dont understand why E does not work??

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I also went with E. :(

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I guess it's because, passing is not doing. So will do does not make sense somehow. :roll:


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E for me too. its a case of comparison


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FN wrote:
after re-reading this..

I think D might be passed..

E actually creates the wrong tense structure..

Comet PASSED the earth at about the same blah, as will Haley's Comet..

using DO in E..clashes with the past tense of PASSED..


Thanks for explanation. I picked E as well but now I've realized that you cannot use auxiliary werb reffering to present tense werb, when the werb actually used is in past tense. Such a silly mistake.

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