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In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals [#permalink] New post 19 Sep 2008, 17:10
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In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen dramatically.

(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have
(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined, have
(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined, have
(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has
(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has
[Reveal] Spoiler: OA

Last edited by fluke on 29 Aug 2011, 05:52, edited 1 time in total.
Added OA and corrected discrepancy in statement E
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Re: SC - Sentences... [#permalink] New post 19 Sep 2008, 17:24
E for me as well

" has " is required ...

D is awkward..
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Re: SC - Sentences... [#permalink] New post 19 Sep 2008, 18:03
Yes, "has" is correct and "while" performing instead of "in their" performing sounds more proper (to me).
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Re: SC - Sentences... [#permalink] New post 20 Sep 2008, 07:52
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It's from 1000Q, question set 15, and question no. 9. Let's try to break it!

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen dramatically.

(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have
(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined, have
(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined, have
(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has
(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has


"the number of sentences" is singular so A), B) and C) are out

D) is wordy

IMO E)
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Re: SC - Sentences... [#permalink] New post 20 Sep 2008, 07:54
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It's from 1000Q, question set 15, and question no. 9. Let's try to break it!

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen dramatically.

(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have
(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined, have
(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined, have
(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has
(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has


number is the subject and is singular. A B C out. their in D has no clear antecedent and the modifier which is not preceded by a comma

E remains
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help needed by experts [#permalink] New post 29 Aug 2011, 04:58
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I am re-posting this question coz i was not satisfied with the responses received in the 1st thread.

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefitting the public, have risen dramatically.
i am confused b/w 2 options:
d)sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has
e)sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has...


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Re: SC - Sentences... [#permalink] New post 29 Aug 2011, 05:51
Richardson wrote:
In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen dramatically.

(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have
(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined, have
(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined, have
(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has
(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has


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At issue in this question is subject-verb agreement; the number ... has risen must be the kernel of the main
clause. Choice E, the best answer, uses a singular verb form, has, to agree with the singular subject, the
number
. Choices A, B, and C mistake criminals for the sentence subject and so incorrectly use the plural verb
form have. In B and C the verb phrases (performing .. . ) do not clearly modify criminals, because another noun
(sentences) intrudes, nor do the verb phrases clearly establish temporal relationships among events. D is wordy and imprecise (in their performing of specific jobs).
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