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Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, a product informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, has become one of the best-selling office supplies in history. a. Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, a product informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, b. Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, the “sticky note,” having the ability to stick to a surface without adhering permanently, a product informally known as the “sticky note” c. A product initially considered an inventor’s mistake, informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, d. A product initially considered an inventor’s mistake, called the “sticky note,” which has the ability to stick to a surface and without adhering permanently, e. A product that was initially considered an inventor’s mistake and has the ability to stick to a surface and without adhering permanently, informally known as the “sticky note,” Source: Grockit
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Re: product informally known as the sticky note. [#permalink]
07 Oct 2012, 18:04
A – Incorrect modifier, Inventor’s mistake and product are not same B – Same as A C- Verb not paralle , CAN and has D – Which is ambiguous and Product and called are not parallel E – Correct Answer
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Re: product informally known as the sticky note. [#permalink]
07 Oct 2012, 18:23
IMO C is right. Less wordy, uses correct modifiers.
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Re: product informally known as the sticky note. [#permalink]
07 Oct 2012, 20:42
piyatiwari wrote: IMO C is right. Less wordy, uses correct modifiers. The error in C is that “Informally known as…note” should be placed next to “a product” and should not be set off by commas.
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Re: product informally known as the sticky note. [#permalink]
07 Oct 2012, 20:44
firstattempt560 wrote: A – Incorrect modifier, Inventor’s mistake and product are not same B – Same as A C- Verb not paralle , CAN and has D – Which is ambiguous and Product and called are not parallel E – Correct Answer E is incorrect because “Informally known as…note” should be placed next to “a product”. Also, the long string of phrases connected repeatedly by “and” is a poor construction because it is rambling and difficult to follow. “Has the ability to” is wordy.
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07 Oct 2012, 22:34
Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, a product informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, has become one of the best-selling office supplies in history. a. Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, a product informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, b. Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, the “sticky note,” having the ability to stick to a surface without adhering permanently, a product informally known as the “sticky note” c. A product initially considered an inventor’s mistake, informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, d. A product initially considered an inventor’s mistake, called the “sticky note,” which has the ability to stick to a surface and without adhering permanently, e. A product that was initially considered an inventor’s mistake and has the ability to stick to a surface and without adhering permanently, informally known as the “sticky note,”
ok i am not sure on the answer but my guess would be A.
B -> modifier errors . Repeating sticky note twice -> verbose. C-> I think a Modifier error exists here , although i am not 100 % confident. D -> incorrect modifier. E -> Just looks weird, havent seen such construction in correct answers.
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07 Oct 2012, 23:48
vdadwal wrote: Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, a product informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, has become one of the best-selling office supplies in history. a. Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, a product informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, b. Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, the “sticky note,” having the ability to stick to a surface without adhering permanently, a product informally known as the “sticky note” c. A product initially considered an inventor’s mistake, informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, d. A product initially considered an inventor’s mistake, called the “sticky note,” which has the ability to stick to a surface and without adhering permanently, e. A product that was initially considered an inventor’s mistake and has the ability to stick to a surface and without adhering permanently, informally known as the “sticky note,”
ok i am not sure on the answer but my guess would be B.
B -> modifier errors . Repeating sticky note twice -> verbose. C-> I think a Modifier error exists here , although i am not 100 % confident. D -> incorrect modifier. E -> Just looks weird, havent seen such construction in correct answers. B is incorrect because of repeating "sticky note". Added the OA above.
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Re: product informally known as the sticky note. [#permalink]
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Capricorn369 wrote: Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, a product informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, has become one of the best-selling office supplies in history. (A) Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, a product informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, (B) Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, the “sticky note,” having the ability to stick to a surface without adhering permanently, a product informally known as the “sticky note” (C) A product initially considered an inventor’s mistake, informally known as the “sticky note,” which can stick to a surface without adhering permanently, (D) A product initially considered an inventor’s mistake, called the “sticky note,” which has the ability to stick to a surface and without adhering permanently, (E) A product that was initially considered an inventor’s mistake and has the ability to stick to a surface and without adhering permanently, informally known as the “sticky note,” Source: Grockit I am responding to your p.m. I am happy to give my 2¢ on this.  First of all, I am not particularly impressed with the quality of this question. The nature of the splits and the issues tests do not bear a strong resemblance to what the GMAT actually tests. I would recommend not relying too heavily on this source. (A) no obvious error, though not a beautiful sentence --- to Rajesh560, I would say: In fact, "the inventor's mistake" is identical to the product --- that's the whole point of the sentence. (B) repeats the phrase "sticky note" twice = WRONG (C) it appears the clause " informally known as the 'sticky note'" modifies " investor's mistake", which is not precise = WRONG (D) also has the modifier mistake, and the faulty parallelism " the ability to stick to a surface and without adhering permanently" = WRONG (E) a nightmare trainwreck of a parallelism error : "... that was .... and has .... and without" = WRONG That leaves (A) as the best answer. Again, if you abandoned this particular source, I think it could only benefit your studying. Does all this make sense? Mike
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Re: product informally known as the sticky note. [#permalink]
08 Oct 2012, 14:26
It does make lot of sense Mike. One question - I modified the option B, as listed below. Can you please let me know if this can be a better option than A? (B) Initially considered an inventor’s mistake, the “sticky note,” having the ability to stick to a surface without adhering permanently, a product Thank you for your comments. Cheers!
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