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Japan received huge sums of capital from the United States after the Second World War, using it to help build a modern industrial system.
(A) Japan received huge sums of capital from the United States after the Second World War, using it to help build
(B) Japan received huge sums of capital from the United States after the Second World War and used it to help in building
(C)Japan used the huge sums of capital it received from the United States after the Second World War to help build
(D) Japanâ€™s huge sums of capital received from the United States after the Second World War were used to help it in building
(E) Receiving huge sums of capital from the United States after the Second World War, Japan used it to help build

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18 Jun 2004, 00:44
Vote for C--it avoids the ambiguous IT (Japan used it..) used what? sums of capital, the Second World War?)
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18 Jun 2004, 00:53
Is huge sums of capital singular or plural. if its plural, then can i say that this sentence is correct -
Japan received huge sums of capital from the United States after the Second World War, using them to help build a modern industrial system.
If not, what is the error in the sentence.

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18 Jun 2004, 00:57
This SC question has already been discussed.

http://www.gmatclub.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?t=6894
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18 Jun 2004, 01:08
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thanks for the link. i went through it. and i still have the same doubt.

Is huge sums of capital singular or plural. if its plural, then can i say that this sentence is correct -
Japan received huge sums of capital from the United States after the Second World War, using them to help build a modern industrial system.

If not, what is the error in the above sentence.

Can someone clarify this for me.
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18 Jun 2004, 07:14
"sums of capital" is plural. Although your sentence has nothing wrong, I still prefer C's construction as it is more concise and less cumbersome without the introduction of a participial phrase. Participial phrases act as adjectives and modify noun "Japan" for it is Japan which is "using them[sums of capital] to help build a modern industrial system"
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