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John Mercer Brooke created a sounding apparatus that is essentially a rod, connected to a string, that strikes the sea floor, causing the tension on the string to slack and a ball to fall to the ground; the rod, released from its weight, is easily drawn up, bringing with it a cup-like apparatus, in which was remaining all specimens able to adhere, for an extended period of time, to a special glue lining the cup. (A) with it a cup-like apparatus, in which was remaining the specimens (B) a cup-like apparatus with it, and in which remaining specimens (C) with it a cup-like apparatus, in which remain the specimens (D) with it a cup-like apparatus in which remains specimens (E) with it a cup-like apparatus and remaining in it all the Source - Knewton
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
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IMO C. will exp if my ans is right
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
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What about apparatus? apparatus is singular noun. [strike]with it[/strike]a cup-like apparatus, [strike]in which[/strike] remain [strike]the specimens[/strike] mailnavin1 wrote: ykaiim wrote: John Mercer Brooke created a sounding apparatus that is essentially a rod, connected to a string, that strikes the sea floor, causing the tension on the string to slack and a ball to fall to the ground; the rod, released from its weight, is easily drawn up, bringing with it a cup-like apparatus, in which was remaining all specimens able to adhere, for an extended period of time, to a special glue lining the cup. (A) with it a cup-like apparatus, in which was remaining the specimens - past tense was(B) a cup-like apparatus with it, and in which remaining specimens - Coordinating Conjunction and spoils the party(C) with it a cup-like apparatus, in which remain the specimens (D) with it a cup-like apparatus in which remains specimens - Inverted order - Specimens is plural and requires a plural verb remain (E) with it a cup-like apparatus and remaining in it all the - Coordinating Conjunction and spoils the partySource - KnewtonHope this helps
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
10 Jun 2010, 09:52
nusmavrikthe rod, released from its weight, is easily drawn up, bringing with it a cup-like apparatus, in which was remaining all specimens able to adhere, for an extended period of time, to a special glue lining the cup. THe rod is easily drawn up, bringing up with it a cup-like apparatus, - there ends this clause.eg: The roller-coaster is a fantastic ride, in which there is a number of seats - this sentence can be re-written as, There is a no of seats on a roller-coaster - vague in s-v right. There are a no of seats on a roller-coaster - this is the right version without doubts - Right??? SO The roller-coaster is a fantastic ride, in which there are a number of seats.
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
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ykaiim, Is it time for the OA??
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
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The sentence displays a subject-verb agreement error. The subject of the underlined, singular verb was is the plural all specimens. When the object of a preposition a clause beginning with the relative pronoun which, the verb within this clause often comes before the subject. Think: WHAT subject corresponds with the action? WHAT was or were remaining in the cup? All specimens is a plural subject. Also, the rest of the clause is in the present tense but were remaining is in the past. Choice C uses the plural and present tense verb remain and does not introduce additional errors. Choice B connects a clause that is not independent (in which remaining...) to an independent clause with a comma and coordinating conjunction. Additionally, in which remaining is connected to the list of things that the rod is doing; it is illogical for the specimens to remain in the rod. Choice D retains the subject-verb agreement error. Choice E uses the pronoun it to refer to two different logical antecedents; the rod was bringing with it, referring to the rod, a cup-like apparatus, but remaining in it uses the pronoun to logically refer to the cup. The correct answer is C.
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
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Ok sure. I am not convinced since I have seen less SC in which subject and verb is reversed. So while I vote yes for C pls illustrate with examples. I think "remain" should go with apparatus than with specimens. If not Why??? Pls illustrate. thanks
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
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Nusmavrik- In this sentence the "specimen" are "remaining" in the apparatus. If the "apparatus" were "remaining" it would illogically imply that the "apparatus remains specimen," which clearly cannot be the case. Therefore we must find the answer in which either "the specimen remains" or "the specimens remain" and we find that in answer choice C. Hope this was of some help... Sameer nusmavrik wrote: Ok sure. I am not convinced since I have seen less SC in which subject and verb is reversed. So while I vote yes for C pls illustrate with examples.
I think "remain" should go with apparatus than with specimens. If not Why??? Pls illustrate.
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
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Hey sameermunshi If the "apparatus" were "remaining" it would illogically imply that the "apparatus remains specimen," which clearly cannot be the case. >>> apparatus in which remains specimens. your forgetting "in which". Specimens are still inside the apparatus. D is still good. Therefore we must find the answer in which either "the specimen remains" or "the specimens remain" and we find that in answer choice C. >> apparatus, in which remain the specimens. actually its upside down - remain the specimens. I will give you an example - He is American Is he American -----> This changes the meaning of the sentence. subject and verb reversed. That's the point. nusmavrik wrote: Ok sure. I am not convinced since I have seen less SC in which subject and verb is reversed. So while I vote yes for C pls illustrate with examples.
I think "remain" should go with apparatus than with specimens. If not Why??? Pls illustrate.
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
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think you're missing the point... the specimen (plural) remain in the apparatus. <--correct the specimens (also plural) remains in the apparatus. <--incorrect So D is not a viable answer choice, which is why C is the OA. The apparatus is not the subject of the verb remain in this sentence. nusmavrik wrote: Hey sameermunshi If the "apparatus" were "remaining" it would illogically imply that the "apparatus remains specimen," which clearly cannot be the case. >>> apparatus in which remains specimens. your forgetting "in which". Specimens are still inside the apparatus. D is still good. Therefore we must find the answer in which either "the specimen remains" or "the specimens remain" and we find that in answer choice C. >> apparatus, in which remain the specimens. actually its upside down - remain the specimens. I will give you an example - He is American Is he American -----> This changes the meaning of the sentence. subject and verb reversed. That's the point. nusmavrik wrote: Ok sure. I am not convinced since I have seen less SC in which subject and verb is reversed. So while I vote yes for C pls illustrate with examples.
I think "remain" should go with apparatus than with specimens. If not Why??? Pls illustrate.
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
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you are taking the sentence out of context here. A simple rewording of this sentence can be taken as: the specimens remain in the cup-like apparatus. In the cup-like apparatus remain the specimens. This is the cup-like apparatus in which remain the specimens. In all of these sentences the (plural) specimens remain in the apparatus. Again, the "apparatus" is not doing the "remaining" therefore the fact that apparatus is a singular noun has no effect on the verb "remain" hope this was a little more clear? nusmavrik wrote: What about apparatus? apparatus is singular noun. [strike]with it[/strike]a cup-like apparatus, [strike]in which[/strike] remain [strike]the specimens[/strike] mailnavin1 wrote: ykaiim wrote: John Mercer Brooke created a sounding apparatus that is essentially a rod, connected to a string, that strikes the sea floor, causing the tension on the string to slack and a ball to fall to the ground; the rod, released from its weight, is easily drawn up, bringing with it a cup-like apparatus, in which was remaining all specimens able to adhere, for an extended period of time, to a special glue lining the cup. (A) with it a cup-like apparatus, in which was remaining the specimens - past tense was(B) a cup-like apparatus with it, and in which remaining specimens - Coordinating Conjunction and spoils the party(C) with it a cup-like apparatus, in which remain the specimens (D) with it a cup-like apparatus in which remains specimens - Inverted order - Specimens is plural and requires a plural verb remain (E) with it a cup-like apparatus and remaining in it all the - Coordinating Conjunction and spoils the partySource - KnewtonHope this helps
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This one was diff for me I think its 800+
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hussi9 wrote: This one was diff for me I think its 800+  Yes, definitely it is a 700+. However, the trick here is to focus only in what really matters. In this case, the clause after the semi colon
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nusmavrik wrote: Quote: Ok sure. I am not convinced since I have seen less SC in which subject and verb is reversed. So while I vote yes for C pls illustrate with examples.
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
21 May 2011, 18:54
yes, the length of the question made it little difficult.
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i think the level of difficulty varies from person to person. some questions we find very difficult while they are easy to others and some q others find very diff. which seem very comfortable.
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Picked C after eliminating the rest of the answers. Quite a tricky question. The length of the question makes it even more difficult to comprehend.
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Re: John Mercer Brooke's apparatus [#permalink]
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This was good one, I chose C, although I was kind of falling for B too, but 'and' ruined my mood.
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