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457. John Smith provides information on the conditions that lead women to a gynecologist, and he notes that these conditions can, and sometimes are, used in the promotion of surgery which is not needed.
(A) and he notes that these conditions can, and sometimes are, used in the promotion of surgery which is not needed
(B) noting that these conditions can be, and sometimes are, used to promote needless surgery
(C) and notes that they could and sometimes are used unnecessarily in promoting surgery
(D) sometimes promoting needless surgery
(E) which they use sometimes to promote unnecessary surgery
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29 Nov 2006, 02:30
jyotsnasarabu wrote:
(B) noting that these conditions can be, and sometimes are, used to promote needless surgery

It seems to me that "can be" , "sometimes are" have the same meaning. Why are they repeated?
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30 Nov 2006, 18:16
In Choice B "noting" is placed after the common noun gynaecologist. Does that not mean that gynaecologist is noting as actually the author is noting.
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30 Nov 2006, 20:33
It's B also to me.

We should also mention our "2nd best" answer choice. With most middle-difficulty-to-harder questions, it's usually 2 answer choices that we end up with. Mentioning our 2 best choices would open up more topics to discuss about, helping us be more aware of the state of our knowledge, patterns of reasoning, etc.

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23 Oct 2016, 21:51
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