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27 Jul 2007, 00:06
ak_idc wrote: Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel. (A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to (B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to (C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in (D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in (E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
Rather than makes D and E likely choices. The "to" in E makes E my choice.
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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.
A.to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
B.that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
C.under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
D.that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement
E.to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
The correct answer is E.
My qustion is why A is not correct, i think to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
to allow...to confine... parallel with each other
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The problem is not the parallelism here. The correct use is to allow; therefore, we are only down to answer choice A and E.
E is better than A because E used rather than.
In GMAT, almost always favored rather than, not instead of.
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'Rather than' is a conjunction that is used to indicate a preference.
eg. He wants a cat rather than a dog.
'Instead of' is a preposition and can't be used to introduce a verb ie 'to confine'.
The parallelism is b/w 'to go' rather than 'to confine'.
E it is.
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but i still have a question, if there are tow sentences as follows
1.Rather than doing homework,i watched TV.
2.Instead of doing homework, i watched TV.
"Instead of" is correct grammatically for it's a prep, but if in GMAT exam, which one should i choose
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happyfiii wrote: but i still have a question, if there are tow sentences as follows 1.Rather than doing homework,i watched TV. 2.Instead of doing homework, i watched TV. "Instead of" is correct grammatically for it's a prep, but if in GMAT exam, which one should i choose ThanX
Rather Than Vs Instead of: Rather than is always preferred over instead of. Rather than is used with intangible choices and instead of is used with tangible choices. For example I would rather sleep with Ana, than with Jennifer BUT I would like to get a doughnut instead of coffee. Also when one thing is preferred over another, rather than is used and when on thing is replaced in place of another thing, instead of is used.
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vineetgupta wrote: 'Rather than' is a conjunction that is used to indicate a preference. eg. He wants a cat rather than a dog.
'Instead of' is a preposition and can't be used to introduce a verb ie 'to confine'. The parallelism is b/w 'to go' rather than 'to confine'.
E it is.
If I can add more....
"rather than" used with verbs and "instead of " with a noun.
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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.
(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
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E use "rather than" instead of "Instead of"
Rather than can be used as a both preposition and conjunction, while instead of can only be used and perposition.
The construction is perposition + noun, so the use of rather than is correct in this case.
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I chose to eat meat instead of fish.
I chose to eat meat rather than fish.
Instead of meat, I ate fish.
please explain construction and correct use, Above are the examples of such use.
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ravi_taneja_1977 wrote: I chose to eat meat instead of fish. I chose to eat meat rather than fish.
Instead of meat, I ate fish.
please explain construction and correct use, Above are the examples of such use.
I chose to eat meat instead of fish - correct
as fist is a noun so use of instead of is correct in this case
I cose to eat meat rather than (to eat) fish - correct
As rather than can be used both as preposition and conjuction, it can replace instead of.
For e.g. I decided to skip lunch rather than eat in the cafeteria again.. here eat is verb so instead of cannot be used.
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Re: another question. [#permalink]
27 Nov 2007, 09:09
ravi_taneja_1977 wrote: Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel. (A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to (B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to (C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in (D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in (E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
E. Same reason as above - 'rather than' is preferable when comparing verbs
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186. Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel. (A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to (B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to (C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in (D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in (E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to E....how is it E..... explain
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Re: denied a motion -OG10 [#permalink]
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it is a case of 'rather than' vs 'instead of' in gmat , "rather than" used to compare clauses(actions,verbs), "instead of" used to compare nouns
this leaves us option D and E. in D comparison is wrong to go home rather than confinement in
E solves the error in D
motion is not subjunctive so that in B and D wrong, under in C is wrong, motion to is correct
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Re: denied a motion -OG10 [#permalink]
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crejoc wrote: i motion is not subjunctive so that in B and D wrong, under in C is wrong, motion to is correct Are you sure about the rule of 'that' in this case? IMO,it is not necessary to use 'that' only for subjunctive mood.
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186. Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel. (A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
I think this suggests that the members of the jury confine themselves to a hotel, a fact that does not make any sense notice that the parallelism is between go and confine so the sentence reads
members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of [members of the jury] to confine them to a hotel
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
I think you need passive voice here in confined to suggest that the members are confined. The sentence reads
a motion that would have allowed members of the jury to confined to ... (C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
I'm not sure whether confine in is idiomatic. anyway to go home is not parallel to confining
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
note parallel structures to go home rather confinement
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
This answer choice maintains parallelism and properly uses passive voice so that the members are confined to a hotel.
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sudeep wrote: crejoc wrote: i motion is not subjunctive so that in B and D wrong, under in C is wrong, motion to is correct Are you sure about the rule of 'that' in this case? IMO,it is not necessary to use 'that' only for subjunctive mood. I am sure about 'that' in this problem, and i never mentioned 'that' is used only for subjunctive, it is very well used as an essential modifier in many sentences, but not in this case
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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel. (A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to (B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to (C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in (D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in (E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to detailed explanation please
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I think E is clear. We can't use "instead of" because the verb following it is not parallel with "to go home", so ABC are ruled out. "confinement" is a noun so it's not parallel. In E, "be confined" means "to be confined", and it's parallel with "to go home". Also, "deny to do something" is an idiom, so E is the only correct one.
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