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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel. (A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to (B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to (C) under which memebrs of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in (D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in (E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to OG Verbal Review 2, SC#93 Parallelism; Logical predicationThe logic of this sentence has two possible options for the members of the jury: they can go home or be confined to a hotel. The first option is expressed using the infinitive to go home; the second option should use the parallel form ( to understood) be confined. Since the members of the jury are not doing the confining themselves, the passive form must be used. The construction x instead of y, when x and y are infinitives, is clumsy; the idiomatic construction x rather than y is better here. Both constructions require x and y to be parallel. (A) The passive form to be confined is required. To allow members of the jury . . . to confne them illogically indicates that the jurors are doing the confining. (B) The infinitive form to be confned is required, rather than the past participle. The sentence is awkward and wordy. (C) Members of the jury is the illogical object in confning them. Confining is not parallel to to go home. (D) The noun confinement is not parallel to to go home. (E) Correct. Be confined to uses the infinitive form just as to go home does; the to before be confined is understood and does not need to be repeated. The x rather than y construction is appropriately used in this sentence. The correct answer is E.
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186. Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel. (A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
I think this suggests that the members of the jury confine themselves to a hotel, a fact that does not make any sense notice that the parallelism is between go and confine so the sentence reads
members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of [members of the jury] to confine them to a hotel
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
I think you need passive voice here in confined to suggest that the members are confined. The sentence reads
a motion that would have allowed members of the jury to confined to ... (C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
I'm not sure whether confine in is idiomatic. anyway to go home is not parallel to confining
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
note parallel structures to go home rather confinement
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
This answer choice maintains parallelism and properly uses passive voice so that the members are confined to a hotel.
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sudeep wrote: crejoc wrote: i motion is not subjunctive so that in B and D wrong, under in C is wrong, motion to is correct Are you sure about the rule of 'that' in this case? IMO,it is not necessary to use 'that' only for subjunctive mood. I am sure about 'that' in this problem, and i never mentioned 'that' is used only for subjunctive, it is very well used as an essential modifier in many sentences, but not in this case
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Two idioms at play here: motion to... and rather than...
That leaves E.
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nice one guys, OA is E
I screwed this one up and took A because I was thinking:
to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them
verb paralellism
But x rather than y is better.
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nero44 wrote: nice one guys, OA is E
I screwed this one up and took A because I was thinking:
to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them
verb paralellism
But x rather than y is better.
did the same mistake
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We should the infinitive form "to allow." Eliminate B, C and D. This sentance has a subjunctive tone to it.... therefore I pick E.
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Rigger, why do we need the infinitive here? Because it's an order ?Thanks
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SC: Judge and Jury [#permalink]
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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.
(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining
them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
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E, I'd say. Less wordy than others, and yet the "confined" part sounds good.
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Re: SC: Judge and Jury [#permalink]
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Answer: (E)
(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining
them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
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rather than is better than instead of
So narrow down to D and E.
D has more wordy. (like confinement)
E is concise.
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A, B, C uses "instead of". Between D and E i think E is correct.
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OA is E
OE:
In this sentence, members of the jury are presented with two options: they may (1) go home or (2) be confined to a hotel. The rejected motion would have allowed them to do the first rather than [to] suffer the second.
Members of the jury must be the logical subject of both options, and both must be expressed in parallel form, that is, as infinitive clauses. E, the best choice, observes these requirements. In A and C, the phrase members
of the jury is not the logical subject of the second option, to confine them or confining them, since jury members are not doing the confining. In B and D, confined and confinement are not infinitives and thus do not parallel to go in the first option.
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ak_idc wrote: OA is E
OE:
In this sentence, members of the jury are presented with two options: they may (1) go home or (2) be confined to a hotel. The rejected motion would have allowed them to do the first rather than [to] suffer the second. Members of the jury must be the logical subject of both options, and both must be expressed in parallel form, that is, as infinitive clauses. E, the best choice, observes these requirements. In A and C, the phrase members of the jury is not the logical subject of the second option, to confine them or confining them, since jury members are not doing the confining. In B and D, confined and confinement are not infinitives and thus do not parallel to go in the first option.
As usual, late but (E)
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459. Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.
(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
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My say - B
that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
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Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.
(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
My Answer : E
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(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to
In this Q...rathar than X is much better than instead of X
Hence A, B & C - Eliminate.
Between D & E.
D - "rather than confinement in" - Not a great construction. Its wordy
Hence E is the answer.
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OA is E.
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