ricecake wrote:
hey snark,
I became a subscriber to your blahg over the wknd
one quick q: do you think it's okay to use the "obstacle" essay to address poor grades? or should I use the "brief" description section for this? my grades is arguably the worst part about my profile at this moment so I figured I could use this to address it. thanks!
Hey ricecake - glad to have you at the blahg! Thanks for joining.
On the Kellogg obstacle essay, not so keen on using low grades for that.
a) was that REALLY the biggest obstacle you've ever faced? (really??)
b) what is it actually telling the adcom about you?
The other thing is that often, low grades are self-inflicted; an 'obstacle' typically means something bad from the outside that happened to you - not always, but often.
Check out this post from the blahg about 'setbacks' - very similar to 'obstacles'.So we feel that you would not be taking best advantage of your essay real estate to use this essay this way. There are some exceptions to it but typically only when the low grades are a result of something else - some horrible personal thing going on at the same life where the grades were a symptom. In that case, talk about the other stuff you had to deal with.
Remember, with an obstacle, you have to show how you overcame it, and the most revealing parts of these essays are where you discuss the actions you took to do so. With a 'low grades' essay, there isn't usually all that much you can say about it - "I worked harder" - it's what everyone with a low grades story stays. It's not often very additive. If your situation is different, then our opinion might change, but generally we don't recommend it.
That being said: Yes you definitely need to address it, but Kellogg has an optional essay that you can use for that.
Hope this helps!
EssaySnark
thanks snark! I love the content on your site so figured the least I can do is become a paying member
Okay that's what I feared. It wasn't so much that school was my biggest obstacle, but rather me attempting to pay my way through school and being immature about the burden of debt and responsibility. It's a fairly long explanation and the "optional essay" says to be brief so not sure if I have enough room there for that.