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Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost so fast. and in some parts even faster than
what they did
outside the pinelands.

(A) so fast, and in some parts even faster than what they did
(B) so fast, and in some parts even faster than, those
(C) as fast, and in some parts even faster than, those
(D) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than, those
(E) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than what they did
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Re: land values in most parts [#permalink] New post 18 Jun 2009, 04:43
Clearly D...Correct idiom and the correct pronoun reference...
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Re: land values in most parts [#permalink] New post 18 Jun 2009, 05:07
IMO E.

'rose' verb is compared ( as fast as. and ... ) and in this case should be mentioned explicitly using did as in E.
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Re: land values in most parts [#permalink] New post 18 Jun 2009, 06:30
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D.. imo..

its not E because in that case it should be ' how they did' rather than 'what they did'..
we are comparing the rate of rising..
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Re: land values in most parts [#permalink] New post 29 Jun 2010, 17:04
Can someone provide a detailed explanation of why D and not E?
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Re: land values in most parts [#permalink] New post 29 Jun 2010, 18:48
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Can someone provide a detailed explanation of why D and not E?


I'm just trying to explain why not E....

"Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost as fast as, and in some parts even faster than what they did outside the pinelands. "

Notice there is a missing comma after "than."
Iimagine the comma and remove modifying clause:

"Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost as fast as what they did outside the pinelands. "

Now remove preposition "of":

"Last year, land values rose almost as fast as what they did outside the pinelands."

Does this sentence sound correct to you still?

No.... That's why D
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Re: land values in most parts [#permalink] New post 20 Sep 2010, 02:50
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Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost so fast. and in some parts even faster than
what they did
outside the pinelands.

(A) so fast, and in some parts even faster than what they did
(B) so fast, and in some parts even faster than, those
(C) as fast, and in some parts even faster than, those
(D) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than, those
(E) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than what they did


Even I got D, but I have one silly doubt.

Correct : Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost as fast as, and in some parts even faster than, those outside the pinelands.

Here we have ',and' before 'in some parts'. According to Mgmat SC we use ',and' when we have list of items or we have two clauses connected by 'and'. But here it does not seems to perform any of the above two actions.

Someone please clarify my Doubt.
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Even I got D, but I have one silly doubt.

Correct : Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost as fast as, and in some parts even faster than, those outside the pinelands.

Here we have ',and' before 'in some parts'. According to Mgmat SC we use ',and' when we have list of items or we have two clauses connected by 'and'. But here it does not seems to perform any of the above two actions.

Someone please clarify my Doubt.


Hmm let me try here- It does play role of A, and B (list). If I see it correctly sentence conveys "land values in X, and in Y...."
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Re: land values in most parts [#permalink] New post 11 Sep 2011, 18:26
Can someone please explain the usage of 'those' here versus 'they did'- Isn't that the primary difference between D & E?
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Re: land values in most parts [#permalink] New post 11 Sep 2011, 19:15
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Can someone please explain the usage of 'those' here versus 'they did'- Isn't that the primary difference between D & E?


Shreya, as I see 2 problems with option E-
lets put it again
(D) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than, those
(E) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than what they did

we nees construction more X than Y now we have- land values rose in some parts even faster than "Y"(this place must be filled by some place where values rose faster!, not what which). Also if you see little closely placement of "did" is not really required- we have comparison of "land values" rise in 2 places ( no need of 2 tenses, placement of did distort the meaning as well)...

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Re: land values in most parts [#permalink] New post 12 Sep 2011, 00:09
My pick is E). My translation of the sentence is pinelands land values rose as fast, even faster than land values rose outside the pinelands.
What they did = land values rose
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Re: land values in most parts [#permalink] New post 19 Mar 2012, 19:01
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seekmba wrote:
Can someone provide a detailed explanation of why D and not E?


I'm just trying to explain why not E....

"Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost as fast as, and in some parts even faster than what they did outside the pinelands. "

Notice there is a missing comma after "than."
Iimagine the comma and remove modifying clause:

"Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost as fast as what they did outside the pinelands. "

Now remove preposition "of":

"Last year, land values rose almost as fast as what they did outside the pinelands."

Does this sentence sound correct to you still?

No.... That's why D



It is still not clear to me what's wrong with this
"Last year, land values rose almost as fast as what they did outside the pinelands."
The statement also means this
Land values rose as fast as they rose(=what they did) outside the pinelands.

Can some expert provide a more elaborate explanation?
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Re: Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose [#permalink] New post 20 Mar 2012, 02:17
D........ element to be made parallel is land values in 2 cases.
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Re: Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose [#permalink] New post 20 Mar 2012, 04:02
Can anybody explain y B is wrong.

So fast,......even faster than

D) as fast as.....even faster than
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Re: Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose [#permalink] New post 20 Mar 2012, 05:43
+1 for D,
E has pronoun antecedent problem.
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Re: Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose [#permalink] New post 23 Mar 2012, 02:46
D is the only best
E is bad construction with ambiguous "they"
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Re: Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose [#permalink] New post 23 Mar 2012, 04:16
D and E had me going for a bit but onedayill's explanation helped
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Re: Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose [#permalink] New post 19 Jan 2013, 00:39
(D) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than, those
This choice correctly introduces comparison with "as fast as" & "faster than" markers along with use of "those".
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Re: Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose [#permalink] New post 06 Nov 2013, 21:15
Hello!

Sorry for bringing back such a death thread. Please suggestions, advices, are very welcome :-D


149.Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost so fast, and in some parts even faster than
what they did
outside the pinelands.

(A) so fast, and in some parts even faster than what they did
(B) so fast, and in some parts even faster than, those
(C) as fast, and in some parts even faster than, those
(D) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than, those
(E) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than what they did


OA D. Narrowed down to E and D (correct form "as fast as")

My questions on the OA

As many persons in this forum had already stated...

I understand that we need a construction more (faster) X than Y now we have: "land values rose in some parts even faster than "Y" (those)

Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost as fast as, and in some parts even faster than, those outside the pinelands.

BUT it still not very clear to me what's wrong with E:

"Last year, land values rose almost as fast as what they did outside the pinelands."

The statement also means this:
*Land values rose as fast as they rose(=what they did) outside the pinelands.*

My translation of "E" is: *pinelands land values rose as fast, even faster than land values rose outside the pinelands*
What they did = land values rose

How can I avoid falling in this kind of trap? --- For me "D" was a contender, but "E" was more explicit for say.

Thanks in advance!

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Re: Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose [#permalink] New post 08 Jan 2014, 02:20
smashingpumpkins wrote:
Last year, land values in most parts of the pinelands rose almost so fast. and in some parts even faster than
what they did
outside the pinelands.

(A) so fast, and in some parts even faster than what they did
(B) so fast, and in some parts even faster than, those
(C) as fast, and in some parts even faster than, those
(D) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than, those
(E) as fast as, and in some parts even faster than what they did



You want to compare land values in X to land values in Y.

"so fast" messes up the comparison, "so fast" is not a comparison marker. So A/B gone. "As fast" is not enough, the idiom is "as fast as", so C is gone.

E is fragmented or just awkward in that the comma after "as" does not make sense when you take the rest of the sentence into account. The subordinate clause in D does make sense because it doesn't mess up anything. That's why D is correct.
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