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26 Dec 2012, 18:14
Nicely done
They has no referent had it been french than it would have referant.
Coming to wrong usage
In GMAT i think Such...that is not prefered Such ...as is only used which is used to present example
So...that is correct usage So..as is wrong usage

Remember we must not stray from our aim lets discuss the whole OG and take ways's and rest we can discuss later
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26 Dec 2012, 18:26
Can't we call combine these exercises into one--- the meaning sets posted by carcass and og 10 questions posted by Archit143 to make a good collection along with takeaways?

ideally if one has the time one should disscuss each og question because the official explainations aren't good enough but they will be far too many questions to disscuss, so i suggested that we disscuss only the questions with medium and hard difficulty
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27 Dec 2012, 05:43
Archit143

Post your questions here from OG 10. Once you have finished I'll create a new post with only the questions and the OAs.

As such, it will be more useful to understand and manageable for all users

Try to avoid ALL questions it is a waste of valuable time, the best SCs are much better.

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27 Dec 2012, 08:35
41. Under a provision of the Constitution that was never applied. Congress has been required to call a convention
for considering possible amendments to the document when formally asked to do it
by the legislatures
of two-thirds of the states.
(A) was never applied, Congress has been required to call a convention for considering possible
amendments to the document when formally asked to do it
(B) was never applied, there has been a requirement that Congress call a convention for consideration of
possible amendments to the document when asked to do it formally
(C) was never applied, whereby Congress is required to call a convention for considering possible
amendments to the document when asked to do it formally
(D) has never been applied, whereby Congress is required to call a convention to consider possible
amendments to the document when formally asked to do so
(E) has never been applied. Congress is required to call a convention to consider possible amendments to
the document when formally asked to do so
42. The current administration, being worried over some foreign trade barriers being removed and our exports
failing
to increase as a result of deep cuts in the value of the dollar, has formed a group to study ways to
sharpen our competitiveness.
(A) being worried over some foreign trade barriers being removed and our exports failing
(B) worrying over some foreign trade barriers being removed, also over the failure of our exports
(C) worried about the removal of some foreign trade barriers and the failure of our exports
(D) in that they were worried about the removal of some foreign trade barriers and also about the failure of
our exports
(E) because of its worry concerning the removal of some foreign trade barriers, also concerning the failure
of our exports
43. In the minds of many people living in England, before Australia was Australia, it was the antipodes, the
opposite pole to civilization, an obscure and unimaginable place that was considered the end of the world.
(A) before Australia was Australia, it was the antipodes
(B) before there was Australia, it was the antipodes
(C) it was the antipodes that was Australia
(D) Australia was what was the antipodes
(E) Australia was what had been known as the antipodes
44. Using a Doppler ultrasound device, fetal heartbeats can be detected by the twelfth week of pregnancy.
(A) Using a Doppler ultrasound device, fetal heart-beats can be detected by the twelfth week of pregnancy.
(B) Fetal heartbeats can be detected by the twelfth week of pregnancy, using a Doppler ultrasound device.
(C) Detecting fetal heartbeats by the twelfth week of pregnancy, a physician can use a Doppler ultrasound
device.
(D) By the twelfth week of pregnancy, fetal heartbeats can be detected using a Doppler ultrasound device
by a physician.
(E) Using a Doppler ultrasound device, a physician can detect fetal heartbeats by the twelfth week of
pregnancy.
45. Delighted by the reported earnings for the first quarter of the fiscal year, it was decided by the
company manager to give her staff a raise.

(A) it was decided by the company manager to give her staff a raise
(B) the decision of the company manager was to give her staff a raise
(C) the company manager decided to give her staff a raise
(D) the staff was given a raise by the company manager
(E) a raise was given to the staff by the company manager
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46. A study commissioned by the Department of Agriculture showed that if calves exercise and associated with
other calves, they will require less medication and gain weight quicker than do
those raised in confinement.
(A) associated with other calves, they will require less medication and gain weight quicker than do
(B) associated with other calves, they require less medication and gain weight quicker than
(C) associate with other calves, they required less medication and will gain weight quicker than do
(D) associate with other calves, they have required less medication and will gain weight more quickly than
do
(E) associate with other calves, they require less medication and gain weight more quickly than
47. Displays of the aurora borealis, or "northern lights," can heat the atmosphere over the arctic enough to
affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles, induce
electric currents that can cause blackouts in some areas
and corrosion in north-south pipelines.
(A) to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles, induce
(B) that the trajectories of ballistic missiles are affected, induce
(C) that it affects the trajectories of ballistic missiles, induces
(D) that the trajectories of ballistic missiles are affected and induces
(E) to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles and induce
48. The golden crab of the Gulf of Mexico has not been fished commercially in great numbers, primarily on
account of living
at great depths-- 2,500 to 3,000 feet down.
(A) on account of living
(B) on account of their living
(C) because it lives
(D) because of living
(E) being they live
49. The cameras of the Voyager II spacecraft detected six small, previously unseen moons circling Uranus,
which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known as orbiting the distant planet
(A) which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known as orbiting
(B) doubling to twelve the number of satellites now known to orbit
(C) which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known in orbit around
(D) doubling to twelve the number of satellites now known as orbiting
(E) which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known that orbit
50. As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated
about 20/500. or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision
.
(A) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be
rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
(B) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated
(C) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision would be rated
(D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated
about 20/500; an adult with such vision would be deemed legally blind.
(E) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which would
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27 Dec 2012, 18:19
Hi

I reconfirmed from the source i has got full stop in between......
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27 Dec 2012, 18:21
It has become a match between two....Guys start posting ur answers and Take aways Other wise it will be of no use
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27 Dec 2012, 18:26
I feel that Q 31 has got a modifier error in option E
Error is Verb --ing modifier error, In E it nonsensically modfies Analytical skill whereas in D it correctly modofies People.....
Option A,B and C are out because of faulty construction and meaning is not clear....Actual meaning should Many people accept their fault at Caomp skill while they donot accept at analytial skills....

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27 Dec 2012, 18:30
Archit143 wrote:
Hi

I reconfirmed from the source i has got full stop in between......

ya ur right about the full stop . Ron has mentioned on some previous mgmt thread that full stop cannot be present in a SC question in the exam that must be a mistake/typo
got all 31-40 correct
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27 Dec 2012, 18:33
Q 32
Verb agreement error......Have been cannot be used it will mean that past action is continuing in the present i.e. The destruction of the building is still continuing. had been can be blindly used here because two events both are in past and the former has ended.....

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28 Dec 2012, 04:02
But the takeaways are from the 31st question ahead ??
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28 Dec 2012, 13:32
41 E
42 C
43 E
44 E
45 c
46 E
47 E
48 C
49 B
50 D
Please post the OA. I found this set very difficult. Meanwhile I will try to justify why I chose the above options.
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42. The current administration, being worried over some foreign trade barriers being removed and our exports
failing to increase as a result of deep cuts in the value of the dollar, has formed a group to study ways to
sharpen our competitiveness.
(A) being worried over some foreign trade barriers being removed and our exports failing
(B) worrying over some foreign trade barriers being removed, also over the failure of our exports
(C) worried about the removal of some foreign trade barriers and the failure of our exports
(D) in that they were worried about the removal of some foreign trade barriers and also about the failure of
our exports
(E) because of its worry concerning the removal of some foreign trade barriers, also concerning the failure
of our exports

I chose C because "worried" correctly modifies the current administration. The first two options have "being" which is not appropriately used here. Please correct me if I am wrong
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28 Dec 2012, 15:37
No compiled lists yet.......come on guys still waiting for reponses so that i can go ahead with posting........
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28 Dec 2012, 16:10
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No compiled lists yet.......come on guys still waiting for reponses so that i can go ahead with posting........

I agree there is no use of JUST posting questions w/o discussion from other participant members. I will post some more takeaways from the remaining 5-6 questions and finish the exercise. Archit can you please post the OA from Q41-Q 50? thnks
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28 Dec 2012, 18:05
Actually i m out of town i ll post by today noon...Srry for the delay
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29 Dec 2012, 00:17
Formulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity do not apply to new small businesses in the same way as they do to established big businesses, because they are growing and are seldom in equilibrium.
(A) Formulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity do not apply to new small businesses in the same way as they do to established big businesses, because they are growing and are seldom in equilibrium. modifier issue
(B) Because they are growing and are seldom in equilibrium, formulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity do not apply to new small businesses in the same way as they do to established big businesses. modifier issue
(C) Because they are growing and are seldom in equilibrium, new small businesses are not subject to the same applicability of formulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity as established big businesses. should not be same applicability but probably applicability in the same way
(D) Because new small businesses are growing and are seldom in equilibrium, formulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity do not apply to them in the same way as to established big businesses. - correct
(E) New small businesses are not subject to the applicability of formulas for cash flow and the ratio of debt to equity in the same way as established big businesses, because they are growing and are seldom in equilibrium.

D is definitely better than E, but I do not have any solid reason to eliminate. I am sure "they(subject pronoun)" refers to New small businesses (subject noun) only.

Can someone please point out the mistake in E?
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29 Dec 2012, 02:20
Posting OA 41 - 50

41 E
42 C
43 A
44 E
45 C
46 E
47 E
48 C
49 B
50 D
Requesting all to present take aways..I am preparing set of question out of these 50 with the heading of " Questions pertaining to Verb ing Modifier'......I feel that this type modifier are real challenge and acing such tye will guarantee 25 - 30 % correct SC answer

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41 E
42 C
43 E
44 E
45 c
46 E
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48 C
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50 D
Please post the OA. I found this set very difficult. Meanwhile I will try to justify why I chose the above options.

Just one wrong sharmila good job!!!!
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29 Dec 2012, 02:27
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IMO
*41 e (are you sure about the full stop in the option?)
42 c
*43 e
*44 e
45 c
*46 e
47 e
48 c
49 b
50 d

Good Job dentobizzz!!! just one wrong
I see that both you and sharmila got Q 43 wrong... Since i got it right i ll post my understanding of it
You pointed out some query about full stop in Q 41 ..Its GMAT forget about dobting anything that is official and do not care even if RON questions it...He too learned from it.

In Q 41 for Q 41 When i referd my error log i found that "Whereby ' introduces a fragment and hence is considered wrong on GMAT....

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