I am confused about my long term gaol. How much detail I should mention in Essay. Would It work or I need to be more specific on this
"As a long term goal, I wish to work for people of India. I feel that India needs strong and visionary IT management institutions, which could bring transformation to the current ways of functioning and deliver its services to the people in an efficient manner. There are two possible paths currently visible to me - I would establish my own firm to lead portfolio of products or I would join public sector to lead some information technology department of India."
Actually you need to be a LOT more specific. HOW exactly do you want to do what you propose to do? WHAT position wlll you hold? in WHAT industry? If you are not specific, I'm afraid the AdCom might treat it all as a "pipe dream".
If you like the post, give it a KUDOS!