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Looking for help with my essays from last cycle (ding) [#permalink] New post 21 Dec 2009, 00:13
I applied and was rejected at Kellogg last year - I was wondering if any one is willing to look over my essays from last cycle to do a 'post-ding' analysis so I can figure out what I'm doing wrong.

I think - my essays weren't focused enough, and that my short/long term career goals aren't clearly shown in the essays, but I'm sure there are lots of other flaws as well.

Please leave a message here if you're willing to help and I will PM my essays to you.

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Re: Looking for help with my essays from last cycle (ding) [#permalink] New post 21 Dec 2009, 08:14
I'd be able to help you with this, I've done this for a few others in here. Just PM me your essays.
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I applied and was rejected at Kellogg last year - I was wondering if any one is willing to look over my essays from last cycle to do a 'post-ding' analysis so I can figure out what I'm doing wrong.

I think - my essays weren't focused enough, and that my short/long term career goals aren't clearly shown in the essays, but I'm sure there are lots of other flaws as well.

Please leave a message here if you're willing to help and I will PM my essays to you.

Thanks
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Re: Looking for help with my essays from last cycle (ding) [#permalink] New post 23 Dec 2009, 19:46
praz wrote:
I'd be able to help you with this, I've done this for a few others in here. Just PM me your essays.
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MBAinNYC2009 wrote:
I applied and was rejected at Kellogg last year - I was wondering if any one is willing to look over my essays from last cycle to do a 'post-ding' analysis so I can figure out what I'm doing wrong.

I think - my essays weren't focused enough, and that my short/long term career goals aren't clearly shown in the essays, but I'm sure there are lots of other flaws as well.

Please leave a message here if you're willing to help and I will PM my essays to you.

Thanks


I PM'ed you my essays a few days ago - did you receive them?
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Re: Looking for help with my essays from last cycle (ding) [#permalink] New post 23 Dec 2009, 20:10
I applied Kellogg last year an was waitlisted. I can give you a look over and see if there is any thing that sounds off.
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Re: Looking for help with my essays from last cycle (ding) [#permalink] New post 24 Dec 2009, 22:15
I applied for the first and only time and was admitted this year (will probably end up going). I'd be happy to offer whatever perspective I could...just send PM me whatever essays you want to share, and I'll try to offer some perspective. Best of luck!
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Re: Looking for help with my essays from last cycle (ding) [#permalink] New post 27 Dec 2009, 18:07
I'll take a look if you like
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