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Re: Markers in Parallelism [#permalink]
 01 Feb 2013, 09:38
Shraddha, I don't see any links in your signature. Hope I am looking at the right place. Thanks [quote="debayan222"]Scp, See my signature. You'll get all e-GMAT articles over there.The first link. Hope this helps. [quote="scp"]Shraddha, Can you direct me to the link of Because of vs Due to article. Thanks
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01 Feb 2013, 09:44
scp, It's not Shradha's sig..it's mine as I've consolidated all the SC articles by e-GMAT as on date and you'll get your desired topic over there...just click on the link in my sig. Hope this helps to clarify. scp wrote: Shraddha, I don't see any links in your signature. Hope I am looking at the right place. Thanks debayan222 wrote: Scp, See my signature. You'll get all e-GMAT articles over there.The first link. Hope this helps. scp wrote: Shraddha,
Can you direct me to the link of Because of vs Due to article.
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egmat wrote: prep wrote:
A. gray and white bones, shining pebbles, and discarded plastic figurines and bottle caps: Correct. Notice that all the entities are noun phrases. They all start with adjective followed by a noun. Yes, all the adjectives are different in structure – “gray” and “white” are colors, “shining” has “ing” construction, and “discarded” ends with “ed”. But all these three entities are adjectives because all these three expressions modify their following nouns. Hence, despite being different in structure, all these noun entities are parallel to each other because all the starting words act as adjectives, no matter what form they are in.
B. grayed and white bones, shined pebbles, and discarded plastic figurines and bottle caps: Incorrect. “shining” is the correct adjective to precede a noun entity.
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Hi Shraddha, Thanks for the article. I have a query regarding the first question. Howcome the list is using "and" twice. The parallel structure in choice A looks like - A, B, and C and D. Shouldn't it rather be A,B,C and D. Am I missing something? Please let me know. Thanks
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egmat wrote: Hi Folks,
This question is fresh from the oven. Try it out.
Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and adding new genes that will introduce unique characteristics.
A. Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and adding
B. Because the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering of the genes that is responsible for currently known major diseases, and addition of
C. Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, alter the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and add
D. Due to the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retain the most efficient genes of the current generation, alter the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases and add
E. Due to the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction and retain the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and add Correct Answer is A B and C also has parallelism error D and E distorts intended meaning of sentence also uses "due to" (retain and add are supposed to modify main clause - ....are now able to create super..... reproduction) Did I get it right? One question here - Due to cannot be used here right?
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egmat wrote: Hi Folks,
This question is fresh from the oven. Try it out.
Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and adding new genes that will introduce unique characteristics.
A. Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and adding
B. Because the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering of the genes that is responsible for currently known major diseases, and addition of
C. Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, alter the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and add
D. Due to the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retain the most efficient genes of the current generation, alter the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases and add
E. Due to the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction and retain the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and add Hi e-GMAT, IMO OA:A Please let me know whether I'm right. Look forward to seeing more questions on Parallelism concept from you this year 
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Hi Shradhha/Rajat, Could you please let me know if you have any article on ' Parallelism in comparison ' as on date? Much appreciate your feedback. P.S: Do you have any solutions for OG Verbal 2 and OG 12,13 (verbal sections) posted in the forum?
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debayan222 wrote: egmat wrote: Hi Folks,
This question is fresh from the oven. Try it out.
Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and adding new genes that will introduce unique characteristics.
A. Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and adding
B. Because the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering of the genes that is responsible for currently known major diseases, and addition of
C. Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, alter the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and add
D. Due to the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retain the most efficient genes of the current generation, alter the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases and add
E. Due to the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction and retain the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and add Hi e-GMAT, IMO OA:A Please let me know whether I'm right. Look forward to seeing more questions on Parallelism concept from you this year -Any update on this guys ? Also for the following question- OA : C. Please confirm egmat wrote: 2. The researchers from the North Carolina State University notified about the latest dairy contamination to the officials of the FDA earlier than the researchers from the University of California.
A. earlier than the researchers
B. earlier than were the researchers
C. earlier than did the researchers
D. earlier than the researchers had
Awaiting your feedback.
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Dear Debyan, All the solutions to OG V2 are available on Youtube. You can check them out below: http://www.youtube.com/user/eGMATconceptsYou can find many OG 12/13 solutions in our internal forums.
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debayan222 wrote: debayan222 wrote: egmat wrote: Hi Folks,
This question is fresh from the oven. Try it out.
Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and adding new genes that will introduce unique characteristics.
A. Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and adding
B. Because the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering of the genes that is responsible for currently known major diseases, and addition of
C. Because of the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retaining the most efficient genes of the current generation, alter the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and add
D. Due to the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction, retain the most efficient genes of the current generation, alter the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases and add
E. Due to the recent developments in genetic replication and cloning, scientists are now able to create super humans through genetic reproduction and retain the most efficient genes of the current generation, altering the genes that are responsible for currently known major diseases, and add Hi e-GMAT, IMO OA:A Please let me know whether I'm right. Look forward to seeing more questions on Parallelism concept from you this year -Any update on this guys ? Also for the following question- OA : C. Please confirm egmat wrote: 2. The researchers from the North Carolina State University notified about the latest dairy contamination to the officials of the FDA earlier than the researchers from the University of California.
A. earlier than the researchers
B. earlier than were the researchers
C. earlier than did the researchers
D. earlier than the researchers had
Awaiting your feedback. Hi e-GMAT, Would you please confirm whether I got the answers right for both the questions above... Much appreciate your response.
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Hi egmat, will be great to see some posts on modifiers/"and" Keep us posted, look forward to your valuable posts as always
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Really nice article!
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I'd like to thank egmat for sharing the above article *hatoff*.
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