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Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds and ice-shielded bays they seek sanctuary from killer whales, their chief predator, and their annual migrations following the seasnal rhythm of advancing and retreating ice.
A. their annual migrations following
B. their annual migrations which follow
C. their annual migrations follow
D. whose annual migrations following
E. whose annual migrations follow



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So I have no idea what this question is even trying to say. The whole thing sounds illogical to me.

Why is the correct answer C not some sort of fragment?

To me, it sounds like this... Narwhals seek sanctuary from killer whales, and their annual migrations follow the seasonal rhythm of advancing and retreating ice.

To me, "seek" (conjugated verb) is not structurally parallel to "their annual migrations" follow.... ugh
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Re: Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds [#permalink] New post 09 Dec 2012, 16:03
I'm always happy for a gmatprep-gmat-original sentence.

Why do you have problems with C. It is pretty straightforward.

A is wrong brcause the verb following doesn't make sense at all in the context

B is wrong for the reason that which is preceded always by a comma in american english or at least in gmatland

D and E with the usage of whose is wrong because is the possessive of who, and refers to who or ewhat ??'

C is clear and straight: narvals follow the seasonal movements of the ice

Hope this helps ;)
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Re: Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds [#permalink] New post 17 Dec 2012, 05:58
This has something to do with the structure of a sentence. Generally compound sentences involving the coordinator 'and' will have to balance the structure on either sides of the said conjunction parallelly. You may find that in the clauses follows the semicolon, the first part is a full-fledged while you expect the same such clause in the second part after ‘and’ having a full verb. . Unfortunately choices A, B, D and E contain simple phrases involving participles or sub clauses having which or whose. Only C sticks to the basic grammar of structure.
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Re: Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds [#permalink] New post 17 Dec 2012, 06:37
Can some one explain what is the problem in FOLLOWING in option A with an explanantion???
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Re: Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds [#permalink] New post 17 Dec 2012, 08:04
@skamal

Pl follow this example.

1. X ate water melon, his children looking at him —This is a simple sentence where x is the subject, and ate is the verb and the fruit, the object; What follows after the comma is a simple phrase, without a verb( looking’ is a present participle , not a verb) . We cannot use an ‘and’ in this case after the watermelon because and we can join only two equal things, be it two clauses or phrases or simply words. The word ‘and’ prevents the modifier phrase from being grammatically attached to the IC.
2. X ate watermelon as his children looked at him --- This is complex sentence, involving an independent clause (IC) and a dependent clause, both of which have their own verbs and hence they are called clauses. The word ‘as’ is a subordinate conjunction and now after having used a subordinate conjunction, we cannot use again another co-ordinate conjunction such as ‘and’.
3. When you follow an IC with and, then what must follow must also be an IC. Since ‘and’ is not underlined and since that will be part of any answer, then the only choice that will go with that structure is a clause that has a verb in the second arm ; only C has that structure.

I hope it is clear now why A violates sentence structure
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Re: Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds [#permalink] New post 17 Dec 2012, 12:19
C

The comma after "their chief predator" signals that the next part of the sentence could be a standalone sentence. You need a comma to link these. To find the correct answer, you must see which of the answer choices, followed by "the seasnal rhythm of advancing and retreating ice", can stand on their own as a sentence. Answer choice C is the only one that can do so; therefore, Answer choice C is correct.
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Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds [#permalink] New post 08 Mar 2013, 22:50
Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds and ice-shielded bays they seek sanctuary from killer whales, their chief predator, and their annual migrations following the seasnal rhythm of advancing and retreating ice.
A. their annual migrations following
B. their annual migrations which follow
C. their annual migrations follow
D. whose annual migrations following
E. whose annual migrations follow

Can anyone explain option a & c in detail
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Re: Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds [#permalink] New post 09 Mar 2013, 01:30
Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds and ice-shielded bays they seek sanctuary from killer whales, their chief predator, and their annual migrations following the seasnal rhythm of advancing and retreating ice.

in icy channels,(...) they seek sanctuary (...) and their annual migrations FOLLOW

A. their annual migrations following
Here "following" is misplaced and unnecessary, it's not clear what it modifies ( Narwhals, whales or migrations)
C. their annual migrations follow
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Re: Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds [#permalink] New post 09 Mar 2013, 02:47
if we were to go by it technically ... the they seek will have to be in parellel with they follow and not following
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Re: Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds [#permalink] New post 09 Mar 2013, 13:54
A lacks the main verb and hence is a fragment
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Re: Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds [#permalink] New post 09 Mar 2013, 15:56
After three minutes and a half I got it right. The important thing is to hnderstand that the underlined part stillmodifies the narwhales , not their predator.
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Re: Narwhals can be called whales of ice: in icy channels, pouds [#permalink] New post 21 Apr 2013, 19:57
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