Thanks for posting. The most glaring concern I see is regarding your GMAT score, as it is a fair amount below the averages of the programs you are considering. Have you considered taking the exam again? The reason is that your highest score is self-reported on your business school application, so admissions teams will focus on your best score. I believe a score of 700 could greatly improve your application.
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