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# On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese zoologist has

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On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese zoologist has [#permalink]  13 Dec 2012, 03:54
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On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese zoologist has found a species of midge that is unlike any other known insect in its spending its entire life cycle in the snow and ice of glacier.

a) that is unlike any other known insect in its spending
b) that is unlike any insect known as it spends
c) that, unlike any other known insect, spends
d) unlike any insect known as it spends
e) unlike any other insect that is known, spending

No problem with the OA, but what are the issues with other choices. Need to discuss as many choices as possible.
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Re: On a glacier in the [#permalink]  13 Dec 2012, 05:55
I would go for C because of concision. I consider C to be much "cleaner" and concise. That Spends.

a- in its spending --> Wordy
b- insect known --> I would consider known insect as a much correct choice.
d- Mixture of A and B
e- that is known --> I would consider as any other known insect much concise.

I have used this elimination process, mainly because of concission. Any comments?
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Re: On a glacier in the [#permalink]  13 Dec 2012, 06:11
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I would go for C because of concision. I consider C to be much "cleaner" and concise. That Spends.

a- in its spending --> Wordy
b- insect known --> I would consider known insect as a much correct choice.
d- Mixture of A and B
e- that is known --> I would consider as any other known insect much concise.

I have used this elimination process, mainly because of concission. Any comments?

There is always a reason why a choice is wordy. What's that in this sentence?
"Any other" is better than just "any". The "other" is very vital here.
What is "it" referring to?
What is the effect of "comma + verb-Ing" form?
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NAIL THE SENTENCE CORRECTION SECTION [#permalink]  13 Dec 2012, 06:28
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On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese zoologist has [#permalink]  12 Mar 2013, 05:48
On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese zoologist has found a species of midge that is unlike any other known insect in its spending its entire life cycle in the snow and ice of glacier.

a)that is unlike any other known insect in its spending
b)that is unlike any insect known as it spends
c)that, unlike any other known insect, spends
d)unlike any insect known as it spends
e)unlike any other insect that is known, spending

Need every option`s explanation
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Re: On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese [#permalink]  12 Mar 2013, 11:32
Ans:- C

C) that, unlike any other known insect, spends ---- correct comparison, since "that"(species of midge) is acting as a subject here and is being compared correctly.
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Re: On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese zoologist has [#permalink]  21 Apr 2013, 19:54
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Re: On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese zoologist has [#permalink]  22 Apr 2013, 07:23
On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese zoologist has found a species of midge that is unlike any other known insect in its spending its entire life cycle in the snow and ice of glacier.

a)that is unlike any other known insect in its spending
b)that is unlike any insect known as it spends
c)that, unlike any other known insect, spends
d)unlike any insect known as it spends
e)unlike any other insect that is known, spending

Meaning:
Sentence says that Japanese zoologist has found a species of midge, and this species is unlike any other species because it spends its entire life in snow.

a)The problem with original choice is that its spending its entire life cycle phrase can act as Noun Modifier modifying phrase "any other know insect" or can act as adverbial modifier modifying clause " How species of midge is different from other insects?". hence ambiguous.

b) it spends - it can serve as a referrent of Zoologist, since it is subjective pronoun can act in place of subjective "noun"

c) correct - ambiguity is removed.

d) has same error as that of b

e) changes meaning. presenting the result of an effect. Moreover, redundant construction
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Re: On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese zoologist has [#permalink]  22 Apr 2013, 14:50
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On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese zoologist has found a species of midge that is unlike any other known insect in its spending its entire life cycle in the snow and ice of glacier.

a) that is unlike any other known insect in its spending
b) that is unlike any insect known as it spends
c) that, unlike any other known insect, spends
d) unlike any insect known as it spends
e) unlike any other insect that is known, spending

No problem with the OA, but what are the issues with other choices. Need to discuss as many choices as possible.

IMO C
Choice C clearly uses that to refer to midge followed by ,.......insect used as modifier followed by , spends correctly refers to that singular midge

A, B, D and E distorts meaning
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Re: On a glacier in the high Himalayas, a Japanese zoologist has [#permalink]  15 Oct 2014, 15:40
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