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01 Nov 2010, 20:53
Tricky one that! Picked C after spending 1:40 mts
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01 Nov 2010, 23:20
(B) to monitor population changes of as many, or
Changes in population is preferred.
'as many' should be 'as many as.'

Better answer would have been 'to monitor changes in the populations of as many as, or', which keeps the original meaning.

However, we must go with C because grammar proceeds meaning in GMAT.

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09 Nov 2010, 09:06
I have seen many other OA with as many as or more than, so what's wrong with A?

And aside from that, why you dont like D and E?

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07 Jan 2011, 22:52
As ...As or more than ---idiomatic
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20 Jan 2011, 06:38
B and C are the candidates. seems to be unreliable question.
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07 Apr 2011, 12:55
In A could for monitoring of population changes of as many as, or of modify annual roadside counts along established routes?
for monitoring : is it a noun modifier or adverb modifier
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21 Nov 2013, 21:05
pierrealexandre77 wrote:
Organized in 1966 by the Fish and Wildlife Service, the Breeding Bird Survey uses annual roadside counts along established routes for monitoring of population changes of as many as, or of more than 250 bird species, including 180 songbirds.

(A) for monitoring of population changes of as many as, or of
(B) to monitor population changes of as many, or
(C) to monitor changes in the populations of
(D) that monitors population changes of
(E) that monitors changes in populations of as many as, or

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I'm quite confused with this SC question. It seems that OA is modifying the meaning of the original sentence.
as many as or more than is not equal to more than...

Even if the contruction seems good, i'm really surprised such a question could have validated a change in the meaning.

Organised in 66 BBS uses Counts …………monitor ……..as many as or more than ……………
You will find that as many / of more than synonymous; A is wrong. Now we have to find which options has used either as many as OR or of more than. Options B does not completely use as many as; as - missing -wrong. Option D &E uses that which wrongly directs the subject as counts rather than BBS; hence wrong. Again its idiomatically wrong to use that monitors than to monitor. Again option D changes the meaning - the population changes !!!. Hece the correct answer C.

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30 Nov 2014, 17:24
BBS uses XX ...to/for is ok. That is completely out, since that points to routes but meaning say they use counts so eliminate D,E.

lots look at A, for monitoring of population changes...its little awkward sentence. hold on.
B/C: BBS uses XX to monitor population/changes logically its should be changes not population because a change in number/count is used. so B out.

between A/C, C is best due to concise sentence structure and meaning.

pierrealexandre77 wrote:
Organized in 1966 by the Fish and Wildlife Service, the Breeding Bird Survey uses annual roadside counts along established routes for monitoring of population changes of as many as, or of more than 250 bird species, including 180 songbirds.

(A) for monitoring of population changes of as many as, or of
(B) to monitor population changes of as many, or
(C) to monitor changes in the populations of
(D) that monitors population changes of
(E) that monitors changes in populations of as many as, or

I'm quite confused with this SC question. It seems that OA is modifying the meaning of the original sentence.
as many as or more than is not equal to more than...

Even if the contruction seems good, i'm really surprised such a question could have validated a change in the meaning.

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pierrealexandre77 wrote:
Organized in 1966 by the Fish and Wildlife Service, the Breeding Bird Survey uses annual roadside counts along established routes for monitoring of population changes of as many as, or of more than 250 bird species, including 180 songbirds.

(A) for monitoring of population changes of as many as, or of
(B) to monitor population changes of as many, or
(C) to monitor changes in the populations of
(D) that monitors population changes of
(E) that monitors changes in populations of as many as, or

I'm quite confused with this SC question. It seems that OA is modifying the meaning of the original sentence.
as many as or more than is not equal to more than...

Even if the contruction seems good, i'm really surprised such a question could have validated a change in the meaning.

I stumbled upon this golden post in MGMAT.
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/foru ... 17266.html

It says - as many as would imply less than or equal to 250 whereas more than would imply greater than 250. Thus, A is not saying anything. Therefore the original sentence is illogical!
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04 Aug 2016, 23:35
egmat

Can you clarify why option d and e are wrong. I understand that the "to+verb" is used to express purpose but some of the posts here mention that the "that" seems to refer to routes. However "that" is a singular pronoun and as such can only refer to the survey.
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10 Oct 2016, 23:25
rishi02 wrote:
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Can you clarify why option d and e are wrong. I understand that the "to+verb" is used to express purpose but some of the posts here mention that the "that" seems to refer to routes. However "that" is a singular pronoun and as such can only refer to the survey.

Even after considering that "that" is used correctly, there are other errors which rule out choices (D) & (E)
(D) that monitors population changes of - incorrect usage
(E) that monitors changes in populations of as many as, or - awkward usage

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