mooze wrote:
Need some advice from everyone.
I was just put on the Haas waitlist w/out interview,..in addition to scheduling an interview and hopefully submitting a third recommendation,..I'm also planning on submitting another essay. I'm having a very hard time deciding what the focus of the essay should be.
On the one hand,..I have an interesting personal background coming from a wartorn country, and i can discuss how my upbringing shaped my decisions in life and helped me overcome challenges. I think this would be a compelling story that could certainly make me stand out from fellow waitlisters.
On the other hand,..because I'm a Consortium applicant, I never had the opportunity to write an essay (or part of an essay) on the "Why Haas". So discussing how Haas in particular fits with my career goals seems to make sense as well.
A third option of course is some kind of hybrid,..the risk is it may not be as focused an essay.
I don't know exactly what the Adcoms felt was missing from my App,...it could be lack of personalization w/ my career goals and Haas, or it could be they just don't know enough about me as a person.
What do you guys think?
Sorry about the waitlist man, looks like Haas has been pretty rough on Consortium applicants on this board. I didn't apply to Haas as one of my Consortium schools, but if there wasn't a "Why Hass" essay or an opportunity to convey this in their school essay, I would say go that route and show how much Haas aligns with your goals and how enthusiastic you are about the school. I think your story and upbringing sound compelling and if you can I would say tie those in somehow, but I think your main focus to get off the WL should be to answer the Why Haas question, if you we're able to do so in your other essays.
Just my $0.02