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Re: Verbal Challenge 1.1: SC Questions [#permalink]
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5. An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art.

(A) An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art
(B) Julio Gonzalez is an artist whose art explores world renowned Spanish cultural themes
(C) Artist Julio Gonzalez has explored Spanish cultural themes, the art of whom is world renowned
(D) An artist who has explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez’ art is world renowned.
(E) Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist whose art explored Spanish cultural themes


Explanation:

Concepts tested: Modifier, Meaning

A) Correct. The modifier phrase at the beginning correctly modifies “Julio Gonzalez”.
B) Meaning change: Here “Spanish cultural themes” are described as “world renowned”. Wrong.
C) Meaning change: The sentence seems to convey “art of Spanish cultural themes is world renowned”. Wrong.
D) As the sentence starts with “an artist”, part after comma needs to start with “Julio Gonzalez”. Here “an artist” is incorrectly modifying “Julio Gonzalez’ art”. Wrong.
E) Meaning change: Instead of saying “Julio Gonzalez explored Spanish cultural themes”, the sentence is conveying that “art explored Spanish cultural themes”. Wrong.

Correct Answer is A.


I am still unclear on why option E is wrong. Both A and E convey the same meaning, no? It is illogical to think that "art" by itself can explore anything.
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Re: Verbal Challenge 1.1: SC Questions [#permalink]
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5. An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art.

(A) An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art
(B) Julio Gonzalez is an artist whose art explores world renowned Spanish cultural themes
(C) Artist Julio Gonzalez has explored Spanish cultural themes, the art of whom is world renowned
(D) An artist who has explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez’ art is world renowned.
(E) Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist whose art explored Spanish cultural themes


Explanation:

Concepts tested: Modifier, Meaning

A) Correct. The modifier phrase at the beginning correctly modifies “Julio Gonzalez”.
B) Meaning change: Here “Spanish cultural themes” are described as “world renowned”. Wrong.
C) Meaning change: The sentence seems to convey “art of Spanish cultural themes is world renowned”. Wrong.
D) As the sentence starts with “an artist”, part after comma needs to start with “Julio Gonzalez”. Here “an artist” is incorrectly modifying “Julio Gonzalez’ art”. Wrong.
E) Meaning change: Instead of saying “Julio Gonzalez explored Spanish cultural themes”, the sentence is conveying that “art explored Spanish cultural themes”. Wrong.

Correct Answer is A.


I am still unclear on why option E is wrong. Both A and E convey the same meaning, no? It is illogical to think that "art" by itself can explore anything.

Art cannot explore something and that is "the problem" with option E. Option E is illogically conveying that art explored Spanish cultural themes.

Point to note: We are not thinking that "art by itself can explore anything" -- it is the sentence which is conveying that illogical concept and here we are present to detect that illogical thought.
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Re: An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzal [#permalink]
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An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art.

(A) An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art
(B) Julio Gonzalez is an artist whose art explores world renowned Spanish cultural themes
(C) Artist Julio Gonzalez has explored Spanish cultural themes, the art of whom is world renowned
(D) An artist who has explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez’ art is world renowned.
(E) Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist whose art explored Spanish cultural themes

Explanation:

Concepts tested: Modifier, Meaning

A) Correct. The modifier phrase at the beginning correctly modifies “Julio Gonzalez”.
B) Meaning change: Here “Spanish cultural themes” are described as “world renowned”. Wrong.
C) Meaning change: The sentence seems to convey “art of Spanish cultural themes is world renowned”. Wrong.
D) As the sentence starts with “an artist”, part after comma needs to start with “Julio Gonzalez”. Here “an artist” is incorrectly modifying “Julio Gonzalez’ art”. Wrong.
E) Meaning change: Instead of saying “Julio Gonzalez explored Spanish cultural themes”, the sentence is conveying that “art explored Spanish cultural themes”. Wrong.

Correct Answer is A.
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Re: An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzal [#permalink]
An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art.

(A) An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art-- correct answer
(B) Julio Gonzalez is an artist whose art explores world renowned Spanish cultural themes-- Its not the art that explores.
(C) Artist Julio Gonzalez has explored Spanish cultural themes, the art of whom is world renowned -- it's Julio who is world renowned not the art.
(D) An artist who has explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez’ art is world renowned.-- here subject is missing
(E) Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist whose art explored Spanish cultural themes-- Julio explored Spanish cultural themes not the art

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Re: An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzal [#permalink]
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An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art.

(A) An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art-- correct answer
(B) Julio Gonzalez is an artist whose art explores world renowned Spanish cultural themes-- Its not the art that explores.
(C) Artist Julio Gonzalez has explored Spanish cultural themes, the art of whom is world renowned -- it's Julio who is world renowned not the art.
(D) An artist who has explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez’ art is world renowned.-- here subject is missing
(E) Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist whose art explored Spanish cultural themes-- Julio explored Spanish cultural themes not the art

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Your explanation is good. Also you can see the explanation in the post above yours'.
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Re: An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzal [#permalink]
E is wrong because it uses present tense, whereas in the original sentence we use past tense. Since this is a "meaning change" type of question, changing the tense would change the meaning and make E wrong.
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Re: An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio [#permalink]
An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art.

(A) An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art
Absolute phrase modifier, clause (no error).

(B) Julio Gonzalez is an artist whose art explores world renowned Spanish cultural themes >> meaning error: its the artist who explored not his art- as per the original sentence.
(C) Artist Julio Gonzalez has explored Spanish cultural themes, the art of whom is world renowned >> modifer placement error, modifer far placed from Artist Julio Gonzalez.
(D) An artist who has explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez’ art is world renowned. >> No antecedent for an artist..
(E) Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist whose art explored Spanish cultural themes >> Tense error + meaning error: its Artist who explored the cultural themes not the his art.
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An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzal [#permalink]
49. An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art.

- An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art
- Julio Gonzalez is an artist whose art explores world renowned Spanish cultural themes
- Artist Julio Gonzalez has explored Spanish cultural themes, the art of whom is world renowned
- An artist who has explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez’ art is world renowned.
- Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist whose art explored Spanish cultural themes

49. Official Answer (OA) –A
A is correct as written. The modifying phrase at the beginning correctly modifies ‘Julio Gonzalez.
B - Distorts the meaning by stating that the Spanish themes are world renowned
C - The modifying phrase at the end incorrectly seems to modify ‘Spanish cultural themes’
D - The modifying phrase at the beginning of the sentence incorrectly modifies Julio Gonzalez’ art
E - Distorts the meaning by incorrectly implying that Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist

Originally posted by jeffjose on 26 Apr 2014, 08:18.
Last edited by carcass on 26 Apr 2014, 08:45, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzal [#permalink]
OE says E - Distorts the meaning by incorrectly implying that Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist

Julio is an artist and he is world renowned. So he should be a "world-renowned artist" right?

Thoughts?
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Re: An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzal [#permalink]
what is the source of this question ?
A is not a good answer--->To put some artist as "was world renowned "seems to indicate that he is no more world renowned !!
this logic is specially applicable to people who have achieved success ,at times, after their death .for instance
we will say :Shakespeare is a world renowned writer
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Re: An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzal [#permalink]
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OE says E - Distorts the meaning by incorrectly implying that Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist

Julio is an artist and he is world renowned. So he should be a "world-renowned artist" right?

Thoughts?
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In option E, the meaning is incorrect as it states that ".....artist whose art explored Spanish cultural themes". "Art" cannot explore themes. It has to be the artist.
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Re: An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzal [#permalink]
both A and C seem fine.
C slightly changes the priorities from being world renewed to exploring...
A prevails.
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An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art.

(A) An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art
(B) Julio Gonzalez is an artist whose art explores world renowned Spanish cultural themes
(C) Artist Julio Gonzalez has explored Spanish cultural themes, the art of whom is world renowned
(D) An artist who has explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez’ art is world renowned.
(E) Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist whose art explored Spanish cultural themes
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Re: An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio [#permalink]
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An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art.

(A) An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art
(B) Julio Gonzalez is an artist whose art explores world renowned Spanish cultural themes
(C) Artist Julio Gonzalez has explored Spanish cultural themes, the art of whom is world renowned
(D) An artist who has explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez’ art is world renowned.
(E) Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist whose art explored Spanish cultural themes


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Explanation: an-artist-who-explored-spanish-cultural-themes-julio-gonzal-153191.html#p1227709



only A And E come close.E is wrong as it uses present tense ..and art can't explore something ...
so A survives
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Re: An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio [#permalink]
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An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art.

(A) An artist who explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez was world renowned for his art
(B) Julio Gonzalez is an artist whose art explores world renowned Spanish cultural themes
(C) Artist Julio Gonzalez has explored Spanish cultural themes, the art of whom is world renowned
(D) An artist who has explored Spanish cultural themes, Julio Gonzalez’ art is world renowned.
(E) Julio Gonzalez is a world-renowned artist whose art explored Spanish cultural themes


Source: Aristotle Prep

Explanation: an-artist-who-explored-spanish-cultural-themes-julio-gonzal-153191.html#p1227709


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Need expert opinion... As a non native I feel E conveys the meaning correctly.
Apart from meaning issues I did not find any error in A and E.
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I have the following queries .
1. Tense: The artist is renowned even in today's context , so the correct tense should be 'is' and not was.
2. Both 'renowned for his art' and 'world-renowned artist' convey the same meaning . The official explanation , however, runs counter to this logic.
3. Art explored Spanish themes sound logically correct .
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