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In the admissions process, universities have begun to focus more and more on recommendations from teachers and personal statements from students, in part that their student body should acquire diversity and partly because recommendations provide more personal appraisals of students' abilities
in part that their student body should acquire diversity
in part for the acquisition of diversity in their student body
partly because of their student body acquiring diversity
partly because diversity should be acquired by their student body
partly to acquire diversity in their student body
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E!
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First of all A and B are out as for the paallelism we need partly on both sides.
In the first part of the sentence it is the construction partly because subject and verb so we need the same construction for the second part.
So C and E are out as well.
And the right answer is D
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i forgot about passive - always avoid it. Right the answer is E
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E for me to!
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C or D.
(D)o correct me!
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as cute smiley said, D is passive. as for C, it just didn't follow the parallelism. if you are following the sentence structure, then it should be partly because <subject> <verb>...
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OA is E.
I picked D partly because.......partly because. Isnt that a better parallel structure than partly to .... partly because
can someone please let me know cos this has been bugging me
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whenever you have a choice passive or active always choose active.
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