What is up dude. Thanks so much for the note, and happy to share some thoughts.
Honestly, and we dont say this often...I like your plan. I wouldnt even change it. : ) One small tweak tho--you will need to show that there is more to you than just work. Your extra-currics make me juuust a bit nervous.
Any way to boost those up? Maybe a way to plug BACK into something that you did in college, and be able to argue that you have been doing it on and off the whole time? Thatd be neat, eh?
Also, I am a biiiit worried about your career goals in private equity. Its like a bad word these days with adcoms--check out the post we did a few days back on the topic.
But if you can clean these areas up bro, youre in great shape. Honestly, I like your plan.
Hope this helps and GOOD LUCK!
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