Hi,
This is my first attempt at an AWA question. It is from the
OG guide. Please see attached.
If you could provide feedback it would be appreciated. Did I use enough different style sentences? How was my grammar? I also put certain words in double quotations - I am not sure if this is acceptable enough. I have pasted the prompt below
Please be as critical as possible.
Thanks very much in advance!
Josh
The following appeared as part of a campaign to sell advertising time on a local radio station to local businesses:
“The Cumquat Café began advertising on our local radio station this year and was delighted to see its business
increase by 10 percent over last year’s totals. Their success shows you how you can use radio advertising to
make your business more profitable.”
Discuss how well reasoned … etc.
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