Please help evaluate my profile : Southeast Asian girl

@nattiya27 looks pretty good from here. GMAT is decent and so are your grades. The quant is where it needs to be for goal. Your age is great. I like the fact that we were able to connect the dots between your past and future, but at the same time, you have a goal that requires an MBA. And that's important. I definitely like the fact that you help underprivileged, and I would recommend that you really formalize or solidify that commitment. I wouldn't say for you to go off the deep end right before applying because that could signal red flags, however reinforce and deep in any over the previously initiated activities in that area. Kellogg definitely likes community service. By the way I'm a little curious as to why you wanted to the one-year program at Kellogg? I think it would be best for you to have an internship comma unless you feel that it would be possible to snag a full-time job without one. The work experience has a brand name attached, however sometimes Auditors get a little lost in the shuffle. Is there a way you can distinguish yourself, or demonstrate leadership in that role? If there's a work project or a way to separate yourself that I would do that. If there any International work project to come up I would go for that in a heartbeat. What kind of international experience and exposure do you have? It would be great if you could get something on that. I'm not really sure about what your letters of recommendation will be like, but I would think through what kind of story you need or would like to tell about yourself and find those who are likely to tell that story. So I would choose recommenders but based on how they see you and their experience with you.. feel free to get in touch if you would like to talk further about your profile and school selection. farrell@mbaprepcoach.com

Farrell Dyan Hehn, MBA
Admissions Consultant & Verbal Strategist MBAPrepCoach.com