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please someone checks my essay [#permalink] New post 21 Jul 2012, 20:27
Overpopulation of the Earth carries significant global impacts that affect our standards of living. All countries are responsible for a great deal of the population growth .Many factors such as lack of education and cultural influences lead to overpopulation .However, this problem can be solved .The three most commonly suggested solutions for the problem of overpopulation are public awareness , strict laws and birth control.

The most effective solution of the problem of overpopulation is public awareness. Public information and awareness are most important issue that governments rely to prevent of increasing population. Public awareness gives a vital knowledge about population .sadly, incomplete knowledge and information about overpopulation lead to misconception



Birth control seems to be another solution of the problem of overpopulation. Birth control can be performed if people incredibly grow in one country. People are afraid to have many children because they can not earn all requirements that children must be have through their life. Difficulty of this, birth control can not be done in rural areas because people like to have more and more children.


The final solution of the problem of overpopulation is strict laws. Strict laws always have to be published by government to prevent of growing population. People must follow laws and they are afraid to exceed the number of children are allowed. Unfortunately, many people expect to have a boy in order to they do not follow the roles.

All in all, public awareness, birth control and strict laws seem to be the best solutions for the serious issue of overpopulation .Overpopulation is a serious problem that people face, especially in developing countries .In my opinion; public awareness is the most suitable solution for the problem of overpopulation.
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Re: please someone checks my essay [#permalink] New post 22 Jul 2012, 12:08
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Hi hushiar,

Can you post the source of this essay prompt, and also make sure it's copied correctly? It doesn't quite look right to me, but it's possible something just isn't clicking in my head.

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