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B - uses passive voice
C - problem with parallelism: "announced... and it expected..." is not parallel; changes the meaning of the sentence
D,E - the modifying phrase should modify "the company" and not the "company's announcement"
Check out this awesome article about Anderson on Poets Quants, http://poetsandquants.com/2015/01/02/uclas-anderson-school-morphs-into-a-friendly-tech-hub/ . Anderson is a great place! Sorry for the lack of updates recently. I...