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plz correct my essay for toefl what score should i get

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plz correct my essay for toefl what score should i get [#permalink] New post 24 Feb 2014, 08:46
When I think about living in a traditional house, all I think about is a big huge family and this house should be in a country side far from the city. I don’t think that it is a bad idea, but on the other hand I would prefer to live in modern apartment these days for too many reasons.

The first reason that I would choose living in a modern apartment is that life now a days is so quickly. As a matter of fact, I'm a woman who has a career, so every day I have to go to work and won't finish until 5 pm. After that, I need to be back home and get relaxed. Therefore, a small apartment would be so comfortable for contained with only one bed room and small living room. Besides, a small apartment is easy to clean because it only takes me one hour to clean the whole area.

Another reason for staying in an apartment is that most of the apartments are located in the city or around it. This could be a good advantage for me in order to stay close to my work and to the huge markets such as a city mall. It would be very interesting to go shopping any time I want.

Even though there are so many advantages of living in a modern apartment, still there are disadvantages to take into consideration. Such as, missing the free space that the house gives, especially when you are a member of a big family. In addition, people who prefer to live independently, will absolutely buy a traditional house so there will be no neighbors in the building and far away from the city noise.

As a conclusion, above all the disadvantages I mentioned before, I'm a modern person who totally prefer to live in her modern apartment.
plz correct my essay for toefl what score should i get   [#permalink] 24 Feb 2014, 08:46
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