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Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents, in bursts or as steady electric fields around their bodies, using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or also for communicating and navigating.

(A) either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or also for communicating and navigating
(B) either for finding and attacking prey, defend themselves, or for communication and navigation
(C) to find and attack prey, for defense, or communication and navigation
(D) for finding and attacking prey, to defend themselves, or also for communication and navigation
(E) to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate


IDIOM TEST:
EITHER X OR Y
X and Y MUST BE PARALLEL.
only E is USING parallel structure.

hence E
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Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents, in bursts or as steady electric fields around their bodies, using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or also for communicating and navigating.

(A) either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or also for communicating and navigating
(B) either for finding and attacking prey, defend themselves, or for communication and navigation
(C) to find and attack prey, for defense, or communication and navigation
(D) for finding and attacking prey, to defend themselves, or also for communication and navigation
(E) to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate


Note you can also flip the sentence as such:

"Using their power to A, to B, and to C, hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents."

The descriptive phrase "in bursts or as steady electric fields around their bodies" - really is just fluff.

Since the above flipped sentence makes sense, then we can say the original unflipped version makes sense as well.
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EITHER X OR Y is a dual marker of parallelism. It can compare only two items. So use of EITHER X OR Y
is wrong here.

C and D doesn't have ||'sm. E wins.
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I have a query

I have read that - the construction is generally in the format ---> to X, Y and Z and NOT --> to X, to Y and to Z.

Though I chose E because it was the best among other options but is it stylistically correct?
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I have a query

I have read that - the construction is generally in the format ---> to X, Y and Z and NOT --> to X, to Y and to Z.

Though I chose E because it was the best among other options but is it stylistically correct?


No, both are optional. We can have either 'once outside' or 'every time inside' rule.

So, both the below statements are correct.

Either to X, to Y or to Z

or

to Either X,Y or Z.
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in Option E

to defend is part of II list or is modifier of to find and attack prey ?

I thought its acting as modifier and if this is the case then "Either to X or to Y" is valid.
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in Option E

to defend is part of II list or is modifier of to find and attack prey ?

I thought its acting as modifier and if this is the case then "Either to X or to Y" is valid.

Hi gaitbhu, when you say you thought its acting as modifier, then your interpretation is that fish attack prey in order to defend themselves!

Well, by some stretch of imagination, I suppose that's possible (attack is the best defense:)).

However, if that was the intent, one would not have expected a comma after prey. Isn't it?
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Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents, in bursts or as steady electric fields around their bodies, using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or also for communicating and navigating.

(A) either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or also for communicating and navigating "to find", "to defend" and "for communicating" are not parallel. Eliminate.

(B) either for finding and attacking prey, defend themselves, or for communication and navigation "for finding", "defend" and "for communication" are not parallel. Eliminate.

(C) to find and attack prey, for defense, or communication and navigation "to find", "for defense" and "communication" are not parallel. Eliminate.

(D) for finding and attacking prey, to defend themselves, or also for communication and navigation "for finding", "to defend" and "for communication" are not parallel. Eliminate.

(E) to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate Correct answer.

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Hello experts sayantanc2k AjiteshArun VeritasKarishma

Though I got this question correct by looking at parallelism, i could not understand what using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate is doing in the sentence. Is it modifying the earlier clause Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge ? but for me it is hard to see how the phrase "using......and nevigate" modifying the earlier clause.

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Hello experts sayantanc2k AjiteshArun VeritasKarishma

Though I got this question correct by looking at parallelism, i could not understand what using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate is doing in the sentence. Is it modifying the earlier clause Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge ? but for me it is hard to see how the phrase "using......and nevigate" modifying the earlier clause.

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Hello kadamhari825,

We hope this finds you well.

Having gone through the question and your query, we believe we can resolve your doubt.

Here, "using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate" modifies the action "generate and discharge electric currents" to convey that the fish generate and discharge electric currents for the purpose of using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate. Remember, the introduction of present participle ("verb+ing"- “using” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.

To understand the concept of "Comma plus Present Participle for Cause Effect relationship" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~3 minutes):



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Hello experts sayantanc2k AjiteshArun VeritasKarishma

Though I got this question correct by looking at parallelism, i could not understand what using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate is doing in the sentence. Is it modifying the earlier clause Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge ? but for me it is hard to see how the phrase "using......and nevigate" modifying the earlier clause.

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This is the structure of the sentence:

Fish generate and discharge electric currents, in bursts or as steady electric fields..., using their power to do A, to do B or to do C.

A - find and attack prey, (find & attack are related actions. They find and then attack)
B - defend themselves,
C - communicate and navigate (again, relation actions)

"using their power to do A, to do B or to do C" modifies the previous clause "fish generate and discharge electric currents...".

So they use the currents for A, B or C.
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Hi In this ques how can I find parallelism in first 'OR' i.e. present after bursts.
Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents, in bursts OR as steady electric fields around their bodies, using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or also for communicating and navigating.
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Hi In this ques how can I find parallelism in first 'OR' i.e. present after bursts.
Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents, in bursts OR as steady electric fields around their bodies, using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or also for communicating and navigating.

Parallelism is between the following two prepositional phrases:
(i) in bursts
OR
(ii) as steady electric fields
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Hi In this ques how can I find parallelism in first 'OR' i.e. present after bursts.
Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents, in bursts OR as steady electric fields around their bodies, using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or also for communicating and navigating.


Hello Tanvi01,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, this "or" is a parallelism marker between the prepositional phrases "in bursts" and "as steady electric fields"; we can determine this by taking a look at what the sentence is trying to present a contrast between through this "or"; from the preceding clause "Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents", we can tell that the two elements being contrasted are the two ways in which the fish discharge electric currents.

We hope this helps.
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ExpertsGlobal5 KarishmaB - Can you pls review my analysis of the correct answer and confirm whether it's correct or not?

Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents, in bursts or as steady electric fields around their bodies, using their power to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate.

In the correct option, "in bursts or as steady electric fields around their bodies" describes how electric currents are discharged so if we remove the portion in between comma then present participle(using) modifies currents.

Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents using their power to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate.

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ExpertsGlobal5 KarishmaB - Can you pls review my analysis of the correct answer and confirm whether it's correct or not?

Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents, in bursts or as steady electric fields around their bodies, using their power to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate.

In the correct option, "in bursts or as steady electric fields around their bodies" describes how electric currents are discharged so if we remove the portion in between comma then present participle(using) modifies currents.

Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents using their power to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate.

Thanks,
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Yes, this is correct. Just note that "using their power ..." is a present participle at the end of the sentence separated by a comma. It modifies the previous clause "they generate and discharge electric current", not just currents.
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ExpertsGlobal5 KarishmaB - Can you pls review my analysis of the correct answer and confirm whether it's correct or not?

Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents, in bursts or as steady electric fields around their bodies, using their power to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate.

In the correct option, "in bursts or as steady electric fields around their bodies" describes how electric currents are discharged so if we remove the portion in between comma then present participle(using) modifies currents.

Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents using their power to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate.

Thanks,
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Hello PanpaliaAnshul,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, your reasoning is largely correct, but as KarishmaB has written, "using" modifies the entire preceding clause, not just "currents"; remember, the introduction of the present participle ("verb+ing"- “using” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship, and this relationship exists between the action conveyed in the clause before the comma and the present participle phrase.

We hope this helps.
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