1. Although covered in about 11 inches of snow,
aviation officialssaid that conditions on the
runway at the time of the emergency landing was acceptable.
• aviation officials said that conditions on the runway at the time of the emergency landing
was acceptable
•
the runway conditions during the emergency landing were acceptable according to aviation
officials
•
according to aviation officials, the runway was in acceptable condition during the time of the
emergency landing
•
the runway was in acceptable condition during the emergency landing, according to aviation
officials
•
aviation officials said that conditions on the runway at the time of the emergency landing
were acceptable -
Answer2. Discouraged by new data that show increases in toxic emissions from domestic factories,
searches for alternative investment opportunities are being conducted by shareholders of the
nation’s leading manufacturing companies. •
searches for alternative investment opportunities are being conducted by shareholders of the
nation’s leading manufacturing companies
•
searches are being conducted by shareholders of the nation’s leading manufacturing
companies who are looking for alternative investment opportunities
•
shareholders of the nation’s leading manufacturing companies
had begun searching for
investment opportunities outside of the manufacturing industry
•
the nation’s leading manufacturing companies are searching for alternative investment
opportunities for its shareholders
•
shareholders of the nation’s leading manufacturing companies
are searching for alternative
investment opportunities -
Answer3. Found in the wild only in Australia and New Guinea,
powerful back legs with long feet
distinguish kangaroos from other large mammals. •
powerful back legs with long feet distinguish kangaroos from other large mammals
•
powerful back legs with long feet distinguish kangaroos from other mammals that are large
•
powerful back legs with long feet distinguish kangaroos from those of other mammals that are
large
•
kangaroos are distinguished from other large mammals by powerful legs with long feet -
Answer•
kangaroos are being distinguished from other mammals that are large by powerful legs with
long feet -
Awkward 4. Responding to growing demand for high-end vehicles,
the interiors of the newest models are
so luxurious that they sell for nearly twice the price of last year's models.
•
the interiors of the newest models are so luxurious that they sell
•
the interiors of the newest models are so luxurious that the cars are sold
•
auto makers have installed interiors in the newest models that are so luxurious that
they sell
•
the interior of the newest models are so luxurious that they are sold
•
auto makers have installed such luxurious interiors in the newest models that these cars sell -
Answer5. By applying optimization techniques commonly used to plan operations,
it is possible to
determine how much effort ought to be devoted to each of a company’s products in order to
meet its goals in both the short and long terms. •
it is possible to determine how much effort ought to be devoted to each of a company’s
products in order to meet its goals in both the short and long terms
•
a company’s managers can determine how much effort should be dedicated to each of the
company’s products in order to meet
its short and long term goals
•
it can be determined by company managers how much effort ought to be devoted to each of
the company’s products in order to meet its goals, both short and long term
•
it may be possible for company managers to determine how much effort should be dedicated
to each of these products in order to meet the company’s short and long term goals
•
managers at a company can determine how much effort ought to be dedicated to each of
these products in order to meet the
company’s goals in both the short and long term -
AnswerNot Sure about this...
6. Given its authoritative coverage of other science topics,
the textbook's chapter on genetics is
surprisingly tentative, which leads one to doubt the author's scholarship in that particular area.
• the textbook's chapter on genetics is surprisingly tentative,
which leads
• the chapter of the textbook on genetics is surprisingly tentative, leading -
I think the first part is modifying the textbook• the textbook contains a surprising and tentative chapter on genetics,
which leads
• the textbook's chapter on genetics is surprisingly tentative
and leads • the textbook is surprisingly tentative in its chapter on genetics, leading -
Answer7. Hailed as a key discovery in the science of evolution,
the fossils of a large scaly creature
resembling both a fish and a land-animal provide evidence of a possible link in the
evolutionary chain from water-based to land-based organisms.
•
the fossils of a large scaly creature resembling both a fish and a land-animal provide evidence
of
• a large scaly creature resembling both a fish and a land-animal provides fossils that are
evidence -
Wrong ...need "evidence of"•
a large scaly creature, whose fossils resemble both a fish and a land-animal, provides evidence
of -
Answer• the fossils of a large scaly creature, which resembles both a fish and a land-animal, provides
evidence of -
Wrong...the fossils and Provides ...S-V-A• the fossils of a large scaly creature resemble both a fish and a land-animal and provide
evidence of -
Wrong structureBetween A and C , both are grammatically correct , I would go with C as the creature is key discovery in evolution.
8. Hoping to alleviate some of the financial burdens of a growing population,
property taxes last
year were raised by an eleven percent increase by the county government. •
property taxes last year were raised by an eleven percent increase by the county government
•
property taxes were raised by eleven percent last year by the county government
•
the county government raised property taxes by an eleven percent increase last year -
raised and increase : redundancy •
the county government last year raised by eleven percent property taxes -
it says government is raised by 11% which is nonsense•
the county government raised property taxes by eleven percent last year -
Answer9. In order to properly evaluate a patient’s state of mind and gain informed consent prior to
surgery,
a substantial period of time must be spent with the operating physician by the patient
to become fully aware of the pros and cons of undergoing a surgical procedure. •
a substantial period of time must be spent with the operating physician by the patient to
become fully aware of the pros and cons of undergoing a surgical procedure
•
the operating physician and the patient must spend a substantial amount of time together,
thus ensuring full awareness of the pros and cons of undergoing the surgical procedure
•
the patient must spend a substantial amount of time with his or her operating physician, thus
ensuring that he or she has been made fully aware of the pros and cons of undergoing the
surgical procedure
•
the operating physician must spend a substantial amount of time with the patient, thus
ensuring that the patient is fully aware of the pros and cons of accepting the undergoing -
Answerprocedure
•
the operating physician must ensure that
he or she is fully aware of the pros and cons of
undergoing a surgical procedure by spending a substantial amount of time with the patient -
refers back to physician Not sure about this ..
10. Many daring vacationers who participate in guided boat tours on the Tarcoles River
encounter
native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whose eyes and noses are peaking out from the
surface of the murky water.
•
encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows,whose eyes and noses are peaking out -
Answer•
encountered native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whose eyes and noses peak out -
do not need past or perfect past tense•
had encountered native crocodiles lurking in the shallows, whose eyes and noses peak out -
same as above•
encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows,
with eyes and noses peaking out -
With modifies the vacationers •
encounter native crocodiles lurking in the shallows,
with eyes and noses that are peaking out[/quote] -
Same as above