manhasnoname wrote:
Isn't (B) changing the meaning of the original sentence?
Original sentence implies - by participating in the assassination, they did something that was not acceptable to the Roman people.
(B) implies - participation itself is not acceptable.
Could some experts clarify this?
Dear
manhasnoname,
I'm happy to respond.
As you may know, I am the author of this question.
I think you are taking a too-literalistic interpretation of an English idiom. In the idiom used in (A), it is understand that the "
something" that Brutus and Cassius did was the participation itself. It is idiomatically understood as an intensifier, not as a separate action.
For example,
When Actor X appeared in a silly commercial for Product Q, he did something that eliminated any respect I had for him.
In this idiom, it's understood that we are not talking about a second action. We are not talking about "
appearing in the commercial" and also some other, unspecified action. Instead, this is a type of intensification, creating emphasis on the single action and its consequences. The "
something" was no other than "
appearing in the commercial": we are merely intensifying our focus on this action. He did this one thing, and doing this one thing had these consequences.
This is a relatively casual, colloquial idiom, so it is not a likely one to appear in a correct answer on the GMAT. A slightly more formal way to convey this would be as follows:
Actor X appeared in a silly commercial for Product Q: in doing so, he eliminated any respect I had for him.
Does this make sense?
Mike
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