Looks like a solid foundation to me. If you're set on going to a MBA program this cycle, you might want to open up the deck with some schools that are a little easier to get into than Haas and Sloan.
Assuming you want to stay with finance, Cornell would be a great addition. Wharton would be a solid addition here I think over Haas or Sloan.
In Sandy speak, I'm not sensing much stardust here. You might play up how difficult it was to transition from IT to Research, and what your significant impact was, because that your only star card from what I can see. But again, looks really solid, you should have a chance to be in the mix.
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