I hate to make an example of you, because you're probably in a huge rush to write this.
But remember that you're not a flat screen TV where it's just a clinical listing of facts.
Here's the thing. A huge part of the b-school applications process is evaluating your communication skills -- the essays reveal your ability to articulate who you are in writing, the rec letters address your leadership/team/interpersonal skills, and the interview gives you a chance to speak about who you are. If someone were to read your post, would they have any confidence that you have strong communication skills?
Consider that. Make an effort to write well, and write coherently. It matters - not just in b-school admissions, but in any context.
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