First, I commend your early preparation; it’s exactly what will help the process go smoothly and will enable you to optimize the process.
One caution: regarding your short-term goal
, the content is fine, but I suggest making the focus more on what good impact you will have and what you will achieve through this goal (i.e., this “harmony” you refer to), and make the learning and growth you will gain as an additional benefits. Also, try to be specific in terms of desired industry or industries, possibly regions, and even an example of a company or two you’d love to join (and why).
Right now, with your current stats and info, I consider your list of schools on target – a nice range of reasonable reaches (Tepper, Ross etc.) and on-pars (Scheller, Mays, etc.) – and all schools that will support your goals. If you do significantly raise your (already solid) GMAT, that scenario will change a bit obviously. A note: your career progress looks impressive from this brief write-up, and I suggest making it a focus of your essays throughexample and anecdote
. It will help you especially with the reasonable reaches, where this qualitative aspect can improve your margins if effectively portrayed.
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