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Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya s an achievement, the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete.
A. the same
B. Qin Shi huang, China's first emperor, was protected in his afterlife by an army of terra-cotta warriors that was created more than 2,000 years ago by 700,000 artisans who took more than 36 years to complete it.
C. it took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors more than 2,000 years ago that would protect Qin Shi Huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife.
D. more than 2,000 years ago, 700,000 artisans worked more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife.
E. more than 36 years wre needed to complete the army of terra-cotta warrios that 700,000 artisans created 2,000 years ago to protect Qin Shi huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife.
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 [#permalink] New post 20 Jun 2006, 08:55
A it is
The only one that uses the modifier properly.
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 [#permalink] New post 20 Jun 2006, 11:08
^ A ^

for correct modifier.

Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya... ,

the army of terra-cotta warriors ...
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 [#permalink] New post 20 Jun 2006, 11:09
And I think there is a typo here

"Maya s an achievement" .. :roll:
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 [#permalink] New post 20 Jun 2006, 20:01
What is rivaling the Pyramids of Egypt......?
It's 'the army of terra-cotta warriors'.

So second clause should start with 'the army of terra-cotta warriors' to modify 'rivaling the Pyramids of Egypt'.

So it's A.

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 [#permalink] New post 21 Jun 2006, 04:38
good job, everyone!! Oa is A :)
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Re: Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of [#permalink] New post 15 Feb 2014, 21:25
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Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya s an achievement, the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete.
A. the same
B. Qin Shi huang, China's first emperor, was protected in his afterlife by an army of terra-cotta warriors that was created more than 2,000 years ago by 700,000 artisans who took more than 36 years to complete it.
C. it took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors more than 2,000 years ago that would protect Qin Shi Huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife.
D. more than 2,000 years ago, 700,000 artisans worked more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife.
E. more than 36 years wre needed to complete the army of terra-cotta warrios that 700,000 artisans created 2,000 years ago to protect Qin Shi huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife.


Q Can`t there be 2 modifiers back to back modifying the subject?
Here in option D, why both Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya s an achievement and more than 2,000 years ago, do not modify 700,000 artisans
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Re: Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of [#permalink] New post 27 Feb 2014, 04:37
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Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya s an achievement, the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete.
A. the same
B. Qin Shi huang, China's first emperor, was protected in his afterlife by an army of terra-cotta warriors that was created more than 2,000 years ago by 700,000 artisans who took more than 36 years to complete it.
C. it took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors more than 2,000 years ago that would protect Qin Shi Huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife.
D. more than 2,000 years ago, 700,000 artisans worked more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife.
E. more than 36 years wre needed to complete the army of terra-cotta warrios that 700,000 artisans created 2,000 years ago to protect Qin Shi huang, China's first emperor, in his afterlife.


Q Can`t there be 2 modifiers back to back modifying the subject?
Here in option D, why both Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya s an achievement and more than 2,000 years ago, do not modify 700,000 artisans


Hi Ashish,

"Rivaling" can't refer to "artisans" because the meaning is illogical. The artisans themselves don't rival the pyramids or the Mayan cities. It's their work, the terra-cotta warriors, that rivals the pyramids and cities.

Hope this helps with your doubt.

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Re: Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of [#permalink] New post 08 Mar 2014, 14:27
Hi Experts,

Can someone please explain me how is it logical to say that "army took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete " ?
A monument or a pyramid can be completed by artisans ... but how can army be completed by artisans ?
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Re: Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of [#permalink] New post 10 Mar 2014, 02:39
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Can someone please explain me how is it logical to say that "army took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete " ?
A monument or a pyramid can be completed by artisans ... but how can army be completed by artisans ?


Hi there,

Thank you for posting your query here.

This sentence isn't talking about human soldiers; it's talking about an 'army' of terracotta soldiers. It is perfectly logical to say that these terracotta statues were created by artisans.

I hope this helps with your doubt!

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Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of [#permalink] New post 17 Jul 2014, 22:49
Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya as an achievement, the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete.

(A) the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete

(B) Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, was protected in his afterlife by an army of terracotta warriors that was created more than 2,000 years ago by 700,000 artisans who took more than 36 years to complete it

(C) it took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors more than 2,000 years ago that would protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

(D) more than 2,000 years ago, 700,000 artisans worked more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

(E) more than 36 years were needed to complete the army of terra-cotta warriors that 700,000 artisans created 2,000 years ago to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

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Re: Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of [#permalink] New post 18 Jul 2014, 00:11
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Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya as an achievement, the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete.

(A) the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete

(B) Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, was protected in his afterlife by an army of terracotta warriors that was created more than 2,000 years ago by 700,000 artisans who took more than 36 years to complete it

(C) it took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors more than 2,000 years ago that would protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

(D) more than 2,000 years ago, 700,000 artisans worked more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

(E) more than 36 years were needed to complete the army of terra-cotta warriors that 700,000 artisans created 2,000 years ago to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

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Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of [#permalink] New post 18 Jul 2014, 12:23
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Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya as an achievement, the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete.

(A) the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete

(B) Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, was protected in his afterlife by an army of terracotta warriors that was created more than 2,000 years ago by 700,000 artisans who took more than 36 years to complete it

(C) it took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors more than 2,000 years ago that would protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

(D) more than 2,000 years ago, 700,000 artisans worked more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

(E) more than 36 years were needed to complete the army of terra-cotta warriors that 700,000 artisans created 2,000 years ago to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

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Oh, thank you for merging the two topics. I tried to find out the post, but this rivaling-the-pyramids-of-egypt-or-even-the-ancient-cities-of-51565.html is the link that I got when googling the question.

Could anyone explain why is "the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect" correct?
I think it should be "the army of terra-cotta warriors was created to protect"
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Could anyone explain why is "the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect" correct?
I think it should be "the army of terra-cotta warriors was created to protect"


Hi there,

In order to understand why use of "was" after ""the army of terra-cotta warriors", let's get rid of all the modifiers used in this sentence and get to the core structure:

Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya as an achievement, the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete.

(blue = Subject, green = Verb)

So as we can see, the Subject of this sentence is "the army of terra-cotta warriors". This Subject has two verbs - "is" and "took". They are correctly connected to each other with "and". Now if we add "was" after the Subject, this is what we will get:

Now "created" in this sentence acts a s Verb-ed modifier that correctly modifies the Subject as the army of terra-cotta warriors was created to protect Qin Shi Huang. The insertion of "was" will not probably make the sentence grammatically incorrect, but it will certainly make it awkward because of the use of the tenses -> past, present, and past. This jump in tenses will certainly make the sentence awkward.

With the Verb-ed modifier "created, the choice remains concise and avoids the awkward jump between past and present tense verbs.

Hope this helps. :-)
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Re: Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of [#permalink] New post 18 Jul 2014, 14:34
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Could anyone explain why is "the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect" correct?
I think it should be "the army of terra-cotta warriors was created to protect"


Hi there,

In order to understand why use of "was" after ""the army of terra-cotta warriors", let's get rid of all the modifiers used in this sentence and get to the core structure:

Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya as an achievement, the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete.

(blue = Subject, green = Verb)

So as we can see, the Subject of this sentence is "the army of terra-cotta warriors". This Subject has two verbs - "is" and "took". They are correctly connected to each other with "and". Now if we add "was" after the Subject, this is what we will get:

Now "created" in this sentence acts a s Verb-ed modifier that correctly modifies the Subject as the army of terra-cotta warriors was created to protect Qin Shi Huang. The insertion of "was" will not probably make the sentence grammatically incorrect, but it will certainly make it awkward because of the use of the tenses -> past, present, and past. This jump in tenses will certainly make the sentence awkward.

With the Verb-ed modifier "created, the choice remains concise and avoids the awkward jump between past and present tense verbs.

Hope this helps. :-)
Thanks.
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