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Role of personal struggle narrative in Essays and Statement of Purpose [#permalink] New post   01 Jan 2016, 01:04
Happy New year,

Background: 17 years of work experience in technology Consulting, technology and Global expansion of startups and Fortune 500 companies. Have done Masters in IT and completed multiple certifications in Technology I am in process for applying for EMBA to MIT and Berkley. I have a hired a consultant from a well known consulting firm to help me through the process.

While writing the Essays and Statement of purpose, my consultant wants to focus only on the professional aspect of my life and what my future professional plans are. I am arguing the point that my life has seen many personal struggles (things like immigration due to war, family strife, personal struggles) that I successfully overcame and continued my walk towards the top.


Question to community: Does it matter in EMBA to discuss personal struggles and the way I overcame them? Or does it make no difference considering that the people applying for EMBA have already done a lot in their life and AdCom is more interested in professional examples and professional success? Granted that none of the essays have more then 500-700 words and succinct explanation of success is paramount.

I will appreciate input of community to help me decide that how much of personal life should be a part of my essays/statement of purpose or a pure focus on my professional achievements is what AdCom will be more interested in.
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Re: Role of personal struggle narrative in Essays and Statement of Purpose [#permalink] New post   01 Jan 2016, 18:13
Hi devilzsoul - as someone who just finished my Berkeley-Haas EMBA, I can categorically tell you that Haas wants to know about the real you. I think your consultant is giving you a bum steer on that - I have no read on MIT, but especially in an EMBA program the mix of personalities and backgrounds is critical. I think that sharing that as part of your application is absolutely the way to go. Obviously not at the expense of your business achievements and aspirations, but if you need a touch point, check in with the schools defining principles. They are absolutely a part of the dna of the school, including admissions

good luck!

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Role of personal struggle narrative in Essays and Statement of Purpose [#permalink] New post   01 Jan 2016, 18:42
Cycle14, Happy New year

Thanks for this- Truly appreciate your input on this. I feel the same way on the issue. I am a sum of my personal and professional experiences and achievements. I am quite agitated with my consultant on this.

Not sure if I can change the consultant and/or company half way through the process.

I will pick it up with the consultant and will try to put a stake in ground regarding this

Regards
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Re: Role of personal struggle narrative in Essays and Statement of Purpose [#permalink] New post   01 Jan 2016, 20:35
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Cycle14, Happy New year

Thanks for this- Truly appreciate your input on this. I feel the same way on the issue. I am a sum of my personal and professional experiences and achievements. I am quite agitated with my consultant on this.

Not sure if I can change the consultant and/or company half way through the process.

I will pick it up with the consultant and will try to put a stake in ground regarding this

Regards


Good luck and going with your gut on this would be my advice. At the end of the day it's your application, if you're worried I'd reach out to Haas admissions. When I was going through the application process I found that admissions staff were very helpful at calibrating concerns - not just Haas either. I didn't use a consultant, but ended up finding a couple of really good friends who knew me well that had also been through business school to help be my editors and advisors. The hard part is you need people who will tell you absolutely and honestly what they think and not try to just make you feel good about your application. Learning to be vulnerable and embrace your uncertainties is a part of the journey anyway - might as well start now!

cheers!
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Re: Role of personal struggle narrative in Essays and Statement of Purpose [#permalink] New post   02 Jan 2016, 00:17
Cycle14 wrote:
Good luck and going with your gut on this would be my advice. At the end of the day it's your application, if you're worried I'd reach out to Haas admissions. When I was going through the application process I found that admissions staff were very helpful at calibrating concerns - not just Haas either. I didn't use a consultant, but ended up finding a couple of really good friends who knew me well that had also been through business school to help be my editors and advisors. The hard part is you need people who will tell you absolutely and honestly what they think and not try to just make you feel good about your application. Learning to be vulnerable and embrace your uncertainties is a part of the journey anyway - might as well start now!

cheers!


Cycle14 Now that I am going through the process, I see the value of your advise. I dont have a problem sorting out honest opinion. I do have a problem of putting a face that is not me - this is what the consultant is making me do. EMBA is a path of improvement for me not a piece of paper. so if the real me is not what MBA Adcom wants, I would much rather have that outcome than misrepresenting myself.

I will also reach out to the Admission staff for a quick discussion.
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Re: Role of personal struggle narrative in Essays and Statement of Purpose [#permalink] New post   02 Jan 2016, 09:08
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devilzsoul wrote:
Happy New year,

Background: 17 years of work experience in technology Consulting, technology and Global expansion of startups and Fortune 500 companies. Have done Masters in IT and completed multiple certifications in Technology I am in process for applying for EMBA to MIT and Berkley. I have a hired a consultant from a well known consulting firm to help me through the process.

While writing the Essays and Statement of purpose, my consultant wants to focus only on the professional aspect of my life and what my future professional plans are. I am arguing the point that my life has seen many personal struggles (things like immigration due to war, family strife, personal struggles) that I successfully overcame and continued my walk towards the top.


Question to community: Does it matter in EMBA to discuss personal struggles and the way I overcame them? Or does it make no difference considering that the people applying for EMBA have already done a lot in their life and AdCom is more interested in professional examples and professional success? Granted that none of the essays have more then 500-700 words and succinct explanation of success is paramount.

I will appreciate input of community to help me decide that how much of personal life should be a part of my essays/statement of purpose or a pure focus on my professional achievements is what AdCom will be more interested in.


I use personal stories all the time in applications and they work very well if done right. Berkeley is especially interested in this so I recommend trying to include that if they are strong enough. Good luck and you should let your voice come through in the applications. I definitely would not keep it 100% professional though if you can avoid it. I feel quite strong about that too....

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Role of personal struggle narrative in Essays and Statement of Purpose [#permalink] New post   02 Jan 2016, 14:56
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I use personal stories all the time in applications and they work very well if done right. Berkeley is especially interested in this so I recommend trying to include that if they are strong enough. Good luck and you should let your voice come through in the applications. I definitely would not keep it 100% professional though if you can avoid it. I feel quite strong about that too....

Best,
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Scott, thanks for the input. So how do you go about striking a balance between Personal and Professional stories? Majority of the essays are 500-600 words. Which means that succinct expression is paramount. is there a system that you apply to see which story will make more sense
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Re: Role of personal struggle narrative in Essays and Statement of Purpose [#permalink] New post   10 Feb 2016, 21:42
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I think you could definitely talk about personal struggles. In general, I would advise folks to think less about what other students may or may not be doing and focus on telling the best story for themselves. If you have a really unique story that defines who you are, you should share that. There will be plenty of time to talk about professional successes on your resume and through the interview process. Good luck to you!
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