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Roughly one-half of the worlds population, including [#permalink]
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Roughly one-half of the world’s population, including virtually all of East and Southeast Asia also, is wholly dependent on rice to be its staple food. A. including virtually all of East and Southeast Asia also, is wholly dependent on rice to be B. including virtually all of East and Southeast Asia, is wholly dependent on rice as C. virtually all of East and Southeast Asia as well, wholly dependent on rice as D. which includes virtually all of East and Southeast Asia’s, being wholly dependent on rice as E. which includes virtually all of East and Southeast Asia also, is wholly dependent on rice to be
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Re: One-half of the world’s population [#permalink]
16 Jun 2010, 07:12
A: "Also" is Redundant, "to be" is wrong form used for "is" C: "virtually all of East and Southeast Asia as well" Changes the Meaning of original sentence D: "Which" is unnecessary "Being" is awkward E: "to be" is wrong form used
B is correct.
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Re: One-half of the world’s population [#permalink]
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Roughly one-half of the world’s population, including virtually all of East and Southeast Asia also, is wholly dependent on rice to be its staple food.
A. including virtually all of East and Southeast Asia also, is wholly dependent on rice to be B. including virtually all of East and Southeast Asia, is wholly dependent on rice as C. virtually all of East and Southeast Asia as well, wholly dependent on rice as - awkward and also missing verb D. which includes virtually all of East and Southeast Asia’s, being wholly dependent on rice as E. which includes virtually all of East and Southeast Asia also, is wholly dependent on rice to be
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Re: Roughly one-half of the worlds population, including [#permalink]
08 May 2013, 14:56
ykaiim wrote: Roughly one-half of the world’s population, including virtually all of East and Southeast Asia also, is wholly dependent on rice to be its staple food.
A. including virtually all of East and Southeast Asia also, is wholly dependent on rice to be B. including virtually all of East and Southeast Asia, is wholly dependent on rice as C. virtually all of East and Southeast Asia as well, wholly dependent on rice as D. which includes virtually all of East and Southeast Asia’s, being wholly dependent on rice as E. which includes virtually all of East and Southeast Asia also, is wholly dependent on rice to be Can someone tell me what is "including" modifying here? As a verbing i guess it modifies the previous clause, however, I think "Roughly one-half of the world's population" is just a phrase and not a clause, as it does not have subject and verb pair(until i am missing something). I am trying to find out how will a Verb-Ing modifier work in structure like this? Experts, please guide.
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