already an overburdened ecosystem" seems to be wrong phrasing.
GetThisDone wrote:
The more people that move to western states, which is an already overburdened ecosystem, the more pressure
on water resources becomes increasingly great, eventually requiring the diversion of major rivers and the
construction of dams.
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on water resources becomes increasingly great
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pressure is on water resources
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resources becomes increasingly great
• The more that people move to western states, an already overburdened ecosystem, the greater the pressure on
water resources becomes
• The more people move to western states, which are already an overburdened ecosystem, the greater the pressure
on water resources becomes
Here you need to focus on to things:
"The more X, the greater Y" and "states which ARE"
Knowing that:
• The more people that move to western states, which is an already overburdened ecosystem, the more pressure
on water resources becomes increasingly great -
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pressure is on water resources
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resources becomes increasingly great
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water resources becomes
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Correct