kntombat wrote:
I was confused between A and D and I chose D which turned out to be wrong, could anyone as and when possible weigh in and help me understand how D is wrong and A is right?
Thank you
Hello,
kntombat. I can see why you may have been confused, and why others have been as well. To be clear,
there appears to be a missing preposition, on, in each answer choice. Without it, none of them make sense. Let me explain. Take a look at the original sentence:
Bunuel wrote:
You could never find a surface solid enough to stand on Saturn because the planet is less dense than water.
The idea that is meant to be conveyed is that
on Saturn, you could never find a surface solid enough
to stand on. The preposition cannot do double duty here. Note that the following variant sentences are incorrect:
1) On Saturn, you could never find a surface solid enough to stand because...
2) Saturn, you could never find a surface solid enough to stand on because...
What the original sentence conveys is that someone (you) could not
stand on the surface, but other nonsensical interpretations may be valid.
You might, for instance, be able to crouch, sleep, or roll. (In other words, as long as someone does not make an attempt to stand from a seated position, the surface might hold.) Although an additional
on in (A) might look strange if placed where it needs to be, it would create a more logical sentence:
3)
You could never find a surface solid enough to stand on on Saturn because the planet is less dense than water.As an alternative, you could place the prepositional phrase
on Saturn at the head of the sentence:
4)
On Saturn, you could never find a surface solid enough to stand on because the planet is less dense than water.Of the options given, (A) is the most concise. But, for reasons explained above, I think it could use an edit.
- Andrew