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# School desegregation has worked well in Buffalo, New York,

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School desegregation has worked well in Buffalo, New York, in part because parents and teachers were given major roles in designing the city’s magnet schools, because extra federal funds were allocated to make each school unique, and because the federal judge enforced desegregation orders.

(A) because extra federal funds were allocated to make each school unique

(B) because of the allocation of extra federal funds that make each school unique

(C) because each school is made unique by allocating it extra federal funds

(D) extra federal funds were allocated in order to make each school unique（A）

(E) extra federal funds were allocated for making each school unique

i think A is the best in terms of parallelism, but isn't "because" a bit redundant?
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30 May 2007, 19:53
yes, A is quite clear but i was considering E too.
If you pick A, you have almost 3 "because".... not sure if this the
because parents and teachers ...
because extra federal funds were allocated to make each school unique
because the federal judge .....

Choice E, does not seem to modify anything....
So finally, Its A for me !!
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30 May 2007, 21:24
School desegregation has worked well in Buffalo, New York, in part because parents and teachers were given major roles in designing the city’s magnet schools, because extra federal funds were allocated to make each school unique , and because the federal judge enforced desegregation orders.

(A) because extra federal funds were allocated to make each school unique

(B) because of the allocation of extra federal funds that make each school unique

(C) because each school is made unique by allocating it extra federal funds

(D) extra federal funds were allocated in order to make each school unique（A）

(E) extra federal funds were allocated for making each school unique

Has to be A
Maintains ||ism
Removes Modification Errors !!
30 May 2007, 21:24
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