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krndatta wrote:
EducationAisle,

Can we eliminate option E on the basis that "that" is not parallel to anything earlier in the sentence?

Please share your reasoning for option E.

Thanks

Oh yeah..there is another "that" in the sentence, but this parallelism doesn't make sense. With E, the sentence reads:

Scientists calculated
i) that the asteroid orbits the Sun on an elliptical path once a year
and
ii) that regularly brings it back toward Earth

Notice that "Scientists calculated that regularly brings it back toward Earth" is non-sensical.
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Scientists calculated that the asteroid, traveling at 46,000 miles an hour, is on an elliptical path that orbits the Sun once a year and regularly brings it back toward Earth.


(A) hour, is on an elliptical path that orbits the Sun once a year and regularly brings it

"that" illogically modifies "path." It's the asteroid that orbits the Sun once a year. WRONG.

(B) hour, is orbiting the Sun once a year on an elliptical path that regularly brings it

Okay to say "orbiting the sun" as "once a year" is followed by.

It preserves the meaning from (A) but makes the fix above. KEEP

(C) hour, once a year orbits the Sun, regularly bringing it on an elliptical path

(D) hour and orbiting the Sun once a year on an elliptical path, regularly bringing it

(E) hour, orbits the Sun on an elliptical path once a year and that regularly brings it


https://www.nytimes.com/1989/04/20/us/big-asteroid-passes-near-earth-unseen-in-a-rare-close-call.html

Scientists later calculated that the asteroid, traveling at 46,000 miles an hour, is orbiting the Sun once a year on an elliptical path that regularly brings it back toward Earth.
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