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20 Jul 2011, 02:49
C- is parallel. Adjective......present participial is parallel,because both are working as adjective.
why A and B is incorrect.We need that to indicate belief,hypothesis,evidence .without that the sentence seems awkward.read the option A and B-what are they meaning?
D and E have agreement error.we need people not a singular subject.their is in non underlined part.
c remain the best choice
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20 Jul 2011, 03:34
C sounds good with revised question
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21 Jul 2011, 06:47
thank to all for explanation as for my tricky one
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06 Jun 2012, 22:51
amitanand wrote:
Scientists have found new evidence of people initially registering emotions like sadness or anger in much the same way as heartburn—by monitoring what’s going on within their bodies.
A. of people initially registering emotions like sadness or anger in much the same way as
B. of people initially registering emotions such as sadness or anger much the same way as experiencing
C. that people initially register emotions such as sadness or anger in much the same way as they experiencing
D. that a person initially registers emotions such as sadness or anger much the same way as experiencing
E. that a person initially registers emotions like sadness or anger much the same way as

i pick C. one split is such as/like so A and E are out. in my point of view "experiencing" is a dangling modifier so B and D are out. please correct me if my thought process is wrong.

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Scientists have found new evidence of people initially registering emotions like sadness or anger in much the same way as heartburn—by monitoring what’s going on within their bodies.
A. of people initially registering emotions like sadness or anger in much the same way as
B. of people initially registering emotions such as sadness or anger much the same way as experiencing
C. that people initially register emotions such as sadness or anger in much the same way as they experiencing
D. that a person initially registers emotions such as sadness or anger much the same way as experiencing
E. that a person initially registers emotions like sadness or anger much the same way as

Hi

The OA is C

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08 Jun 2012, 14:02
amitanand wrote:
Scientists have found new evidence of people initially registering emotions like sadness or anger in much the same way as heartburn—by monitoring what’s going on within their bodies.
A. of people initially registering emotions like sadness or anger in much the same way as
B. of people initially registering emotions such as sadness or anger much the same way as experiencing
C. that people initially register emotions such as sadness or anger in much the same way as they experiencing
D. that a person initially registers emotions such as sadness or anger much the same way as experiencing
E. that a person initially registers emotions like sadness or anger much the same way as

Choice 'c' seems awkward as written. "as they experiencing heartburn.." seems wrong to me
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23 Jul 2012, 01:53
Option C"...they experiencing..."

Can anyone explain how is that correct
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23 Jul 2012, 02:19
Strike 1 => idiom a, b out
Strike 2 => such as (example) vs like E out
Strike 3 => verb tense (plural) D out

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23 Jul 2012, 02:21
Looking back I think if u keep verb tense D and E fall out. Right idiom A and B fall out! Quicker!

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23 Jul 2012, 08:26
hirendhanak wrote:
can someone give diff

Scientists have found new evidence of people ....... vs scintists have found new evidence that...

I mean why do we opt sentence with "that" instead of "of "

that followed by a sentence segment is a restrictive clause which shows the importance of the matter which follows "that"
"of"makes it very general and has larger scope under consideration
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18 Oct 2013, 11:24
Hey moderators,
Would you kindly correct the original question to avoid new comers answer it incorrectly?

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24 Oct 2013, 00:11
out of all 5, i shortlisted b and c, and the only reason i could digest c was that b uses 'ing' that is not preferable in GMAT. Otherwise i'm not clear why new evidence in the question is to follow 'that' insted of 'of'
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13 Sep 2016, 13:15
Scientists have found new evidence of people initially registering emotions like sadness or anger in much the same way as heartburn--by monitoring what's going on within their bodies.

(A) of people initially registering emotions like sadness or anger in much the same way as
(B) of people initially registering emotions such as sadness or anger much the same as experiencing
(C) that people initially register emotions such as sadness or anger in much the same way as they experience
(D) that a person initially registers emotions such as sadness or anger much the same way as experiencing
(E) that a person initially registers emotions like sadness or anger much the same as

"...by monitoring what's going on within their bodies." plural their, so D and E are out for singular a person.
emotions like sadness or anger...correct way to introduce examples is with "such as" so A is out.
much the same as experiencing heartburn sounds awkward in B, so going with C.
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