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senctence correction dymystified comp [#permalink] New post   Updated on: 06 Apr 2007, 11:24
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The Demystified computer, considered by most analysts the major breakthrough of the 1980's, was the pivotal event that caused technology and mass communication to unite.

b) The dymystified computers, which most analysts have been considering
c) Demystifying the computer, which most analysts have consider to be
d) The demystification of the computer, which most analysts consider the
e) The demysitified computer, which most analysts conder a

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Originally posted by Amardeep Sharma on 06 Apr 2007, 10:55.
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Re: senctence correction dymystified comp [#permalink] New post   06 Apr 2007, 11:06
Good one Amardeep.

Noun + Be-verb + Noun complement
D it is ( I think there is typing mistake in this)
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Re: senctence correction dymystified comp [#permalink] New post   06 Apr 2007, 11:13
Yes in D u may delete have (its a typing mistake)



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Re: senctence correction dymystified comp [#permalink] New post   07 Apr 2007, 02:40
It is D,

The sentence is about AN EVENT that caused..., therefore we can quickly get rid off answers "A", "B" and "E".
"consider TO BE" is redundant, so answer "C" is out.
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Re: senctence correction dymystified comp [#permalink] New post   07 Apr 2007, 02:48
Amardeep Sharma wrote:
Hi,

The Demystified computer, considered by most analysts the major breakthrough of the 1980's, was the pivotal event that caused technology and mass communication to unite.

b) The dymystified computers, which most analysts have been considering
c) Demystifying the computer, which most analysts have consider to be
d) The demystification of the computer, which most analysts consider the
e) The demysitified computer, which most analysts conder a

regards,

Amardeep


'demystification of computer' is the only event. Hence D
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Re: senctence correction dymystified comp [#permalink] New post   28 Feb 2010, 13:22
The only event = The demystification of the computer.
Hence D.
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Re: senctence correction dymystified comp [#permalink] New post   28 Feb 2010, 21:37
i go for D too since it is the only one that can be described as an "event"
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Re: senctence correction dymystified comp [#permalink] New post   03 Mar 2010, 07:05
Amardeep Sharma wrote:
Hi,

The Demystified computer, considered by most analysts the major breakthrough of the 1980's, was the pivotal event that caused technology and mass communication to unite.

b) The dymystified computers, which most analysts have been considering
c) Demystifying the computer, which most analysts have consider to be
d) The demystification of the computer, which most analysts consider the
e) The demysitified computer, which most analysts conder a

regards,

Amardeep


good question.
I almost fell for A!
I was to quick to conclude that the sentence is better with consistent subject.
But yes, it is true that computer can never be an event.

great question.

It is D indeed.



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