Hello, on monday I'm taking the GMAT again. The last couple of sample test I've done I have wondered if I should double enter between paragraphs?
What do I mean with this? Example (1st and 2nd paragraphs of an AWA reply) *don't mind any other mistakes or suggestions you may have here*
OPTION 1 (single space) vs OPTION 2 (Double space)
I lean more towards option 1, but I really don't know if the computer or human checker considers this to assign a grade for the AWA seciton.
Thanks,
Grey
OPTION 1
The advertisement intends to persuade the reader to try a new protein called Train and Gain that can be bought on pharmacies. Nevertheless the facts provided on the advertisement are enough to make it's conclusion convincing to the reader. First, the advertisement does not consider other effects that this protein may have on the consumer. Secondly it does not provide proof of why this protein should work for non-professionals. Thirdly, there is a lack of requisites to make this protein work.
Consumers interested on increasing their strength are likely to not only be interested on this, but on several other outputs. A underweight person might be interested on increasing strength but even more called into increasing their weight. The lack of detail of how this protein increased the strength will make this consumer not try Train & Gain. This same reasoning will make other consumers interested on being better at a specific sport not convinced on buying it.
OPTION 2
The advertisement intends to persuade the reader to try a new protein called Train and Gain that can be bought on pharmacies. Nevertheless the facts provided on the advertisement are enough to make it's conclusion convincing to the reader. First, the advertisement does not consider other effects that this protein may have on the consumer. Secondly it does not provide proof of why this protein should work for non-professionals. Thirdly, there is a lack of requisites to make this protein work.
Consumers interested on increasing their strength are likely to not only be interested on this, but on several other outputs. A underweight person might be interested on increasing strength but even more called into increasing their weight. The lack of detail of how this protein increased the strength will make this consumer not try Train & Gain. This same reasoning will make other consumers interested on being better at a specific sport not convinced on buying it.