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 05 Dec 2006, 19:22
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Some psychiatric studies indicate that among distinguished artists the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent as in the population at large.
(A) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent as in
(B) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent than in
(C) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent when compared to
(D) manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent when compared to
(E) manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent than in
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I wil go with E.
sentence looks okay without "the rates of"
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E uses correct idiom 'more ..than' and doesn't have 'rates of ..'
ayushi wrote: Some psychiatric studies indicate that among distinguished artists the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent as in the population at large.
(A) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent as in
(B) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent than in
(C) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent when compared to
(D) manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent when compared to
(E) manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent than in
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B or E.
To me they both look good. The use of 'rates..' may be bit excessive in B.
So, E.
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rate cannot indicate quantity.(unless it refers to the price of the object).
rate must refer to a 'speed of change'
The passage compares quantities, not the speed of change of them.
E correctly compares the quantities. I like E.
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