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11. Some psychiatric studies indicate that among distinguished artists the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent as in the population at large.
(A) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent as in
(B) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent than in
(C) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent when compared to
(D) manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent when compared to
(E) manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent than in

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11. Some psychiatric studies indicate that among distinguished artists the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent as in the population at large.
(A) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent as in
(B) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent than in
(C) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent when compared to
(D) manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent when compared to
(E) manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent than in

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The rate is not prevalent..it's the disease that is prevalent.
If we want to use "rates"..than sentence should have been "The rates of X and Y are z times than those of population at large"..which is not in options. So A,B and C are out.

In D: one of the error is the wrong usage of "as X as"...."as much as" ...or ..."as prevalent as"

Only E is right.
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24 Feb 2010, 00:00
wow i picked B...

yah you're right (above post)... it's not the rate that's prevalent... but the depression that is prevalent.
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23 Sep 2010, 23:25
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The rate is not prevalent..it's the disease that is prevalent.
If we want to use "rates"..than sentence should have been "The rates of X and Y are z times than those of population at large"..which is not in options. So A,B and C are out.

In D: one of the error is the wrong usage of "as X as"...."as much as" ...or ..."as prevalent as"

Only E is right.

I pick B

Thanks for the explanation!
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24 Sep 2010, 00:51
picked B....din see that one..
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24 Sep 2010, 17:34
did the same mistake.. picked B and felt E was missing a punctuation after artists.
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24 Sep 2010, 18:25
Stuck between B and E and picked E.

Thanks for the explanation.
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But isn't E changing the meaning of the sentence, we went from as prevalent as in the population at large to more prevalent that the population at large.
Clearly two different things here

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10 May 2014, 23:16
raghavs wrote:
11. Some psychiatric studies indicate that among distinguished artists the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent as in the population at large.
(A) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent as in
(B) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent than in
(C) the rates of manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent when compared to
(D) manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times as prevalent when compared to
(E) manic depression and major depression are ten to thirteen times more prevalent than in

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@raghavs - Re-read the entire sentence and try to get out the intended meaning. The sentence states that among the particular group of population X and Y are more prevalent than in the entire population.
Option A, B, C - incorrectly mentions that rates of X and Y are prevalent. It should be X and Y are more prevalent and not their rates.
Option D - prevalent should be used as "prevalent in". Also incorrect usage of "as". It should be "as x as y". Hence incorrect.
Option E - Correct all the errors. Also correctly mentions that X and Y are more prevalent than in Z.
Hope that helps.
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12 Sep 2015, 13:06
Is this actually a sub 600 level question ?
Doesnt seem like. !!
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12 Sep 2015, 18:17
just meaning analysis
comparison in A,B,C is correct but
rate can not be prevalent, but the depression are prevalant

this point is simple to say but we need focus your mind onmeaning to realize it on the test day
A, B, C are out
Re: Some psychiatric studies indicate that among distinguished   [#permalink] 12 Sep 2015, 18:17
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