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Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Muller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as a Sanskrit scholar and culminated in virtually every honor that European governments and learned societies could bestow.

(A) Muller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as

(B) Muller’s career began in an unpromising apprenticeship as

(C) Muller’s career began with the unpromising apprenticeship of being

(D) Muller had begun his career with the unpromising apprenticeship of being

(E) the career of Muller has begun with an unpromising apprenticeship of





























It is not Friedrich Muller who was spanning more than fifty years, but his career thus A,D are straight out

Now we have -B,C,E
B -sounds good, Hold it
C- with and being sound awkward, eliminate it
E- of usage is awkward, shows as the apprenticeship began because of a sanskrit scholar.

thus B is the answer

anyother points that I am missing?
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Re: SC 1000- 667/1000- Clarification [#permalink] New post 02 Mar 2008, 06:54
I eliminate E because of incorrect verb usage : has begun
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Re: SC 1000- 667/1000- Clarification [#permalink] New post 02 Mar 2008, 08:15
Clealy the modifier should be applied to Career but not to a person.

hence answer B
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Re: SC 1000- 667/1000- Clarification [#permalink] New post 20 Jul 2011, 12:54
i am lost here, can someone explain me what is 'Sanskrit scholar ' compared to?

Friedrich Muller’s career began in an unpromising apprenticeship as a Sanskrit scholar
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Re: SC 1000- 667/1000- Clarification [#permalink] New post 20 Jul 2011, 13:03
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i am lost here, can someone explain me what is 'Sanskrit scholar ' compared to?

Friedrich Muller’s career began in an unpromising apprenticeship as a Sanskrit scholar


Why do you need to compare Sanskrit scholar in this case? The sentence uses AS as "in the role of".
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Re: SC 1000- 667/1000- Clarification [#permalink] New post 21 Jul 2011, 04:07
My approuch take me less the 1 minute.

Parallel structure only in B

career began in ......and culminated in....


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Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Muller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as a Sanskrit scholar and culminated in virtually every honor that European governments and learned societies could bestow.

(A) Muller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as

(B) Muller’s career began in an unpromising apprenticeship as

(C) Muller’s career began with the unpromising apprenticeship of being

(D) Muller had begun his career with the unpromising apprenticeship of being

(E) the career of Muller has begun with an unpromising apprenticeship of

It is not Friedrich Muller who was spanning more than fifty years, but his career thus A,D are straight out

Now we have -B,C,E
B -sounds good, Hold it
C- with and being sound awkward, eliminate it
E- of usage is awkward, shows as the apprenticeship began because of a sanskrit scholar.

thus B is the answer

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Re: SC 1000- 667/1000- Clarification [#permalink] New post 21 Jul 2011, 06:12
Although I agree that B is the best choice in this sentence, I read somewhere that modifier modifying the possessive would give an impression as if it were modifying noun. In this case, "Muller" rather than "Muller's career". So if there is one more choice starting with "The career of Muller began.." keeping everything else same as B. Which one is supposed to be correct the choice with possessive or the choice with "The career"?
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Re: Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Muller began his [#permalink] New post 12 Mar 2012, 16:51
I have chosen B for this question:

A. The modifier is used incorrectly in this answer choice. Currently, "spanning more than 50 years" modifies Friedrich Muller - this is incorrect because a person cannot span more than 50 years. Rather, it was "Friedrich Muller's career" that spanned more than 50 years - this is the correct subject.

B. This answer choice is correct because it solves the modifier error. Also, the use of the simple past tense "began" correctly describes an event that occurred in the past.

C. Although the modifier error has been corrected in this answer choice, it is wordy. The words "of being" is awkward.

D. The verb tense should be simple past not past perfect. Also, "of being" shows up again in this answer choice.

E. This answer choice makes absolutely no sense. It reads "Friedrich the career of Muller..." Also, the use of present perfect tense is incorrect.
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Re: Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Muller began his [#permalink] New post 12 Mar 2012, 21:15
B. Subject is his career so must use possessive.
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Re: Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Muller began his [#permalink] New post 18 Mar 2012, 05:03
+1 for B.

The initial modifier means that we must modify career => A and D out.
E incorrectly used present perfect.
C is awkwardly worded
B wins

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Re: SC 1000- 667/1000- Clarification [#permalink] New post 18 Mar 2012, 09:30
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Although I agree that B is the best choice in this sentence, I read somewhere that modifier modifying the possessive would give an impression as if it were modifying noun. In this case, "Muller" rather than "Muller's career". So if there is one more choice starting with "The career of Muller began.." keeping everything else same as B. Which one is supposed to be correct the choice with possessive or the choice with "The career"?



The career of Muller began keeping everything else same as B ill be correct
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Re: Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Muller began his [#permalink] New post 22 Nov 2012, 19:52
in B , what is "as a scholar"?

the carreer is as scholar

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the apprenticeship is as the scholar.

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Re: Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Muller began his [#permalink] New post 27 Sep 2013, 02:46
We are talking about Muller's career here and therefore, A D E go out.

Between B and C, I first picked C where I missed the parallelism in the sentence (began in and culminated in)

The correct answer is B.
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Re: Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Muller began his [#permalink] New post 27 Dec 2013, 09:56
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In response to someone who asked why we don't say "began in an apprenticeship to be a scholar"---let's examine the following:

Core = "his career BEGAN in X as Y and culminated in Z"

BEGAN in (an apprenticeship) AS a scholar.

So usage of "AS" is correct.

We do not use "TO" as in "began in an apprenticeship to be a scholar" because that would CHANGE the MEANING.

"TO" usage = "in order to" --> This implies that he began an apprenticeship in order to become a scholar.

But no, that's not the meaning here. He began the apprenticeship AS a scholar--not in order to become a scholar.

Yes, the general structure is:

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Re: Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Muller began his [#permalink] New post 02 Jan 2014, 02:57
APPRENTICESHIP AS SOMBODY is idiom though this one sound hard because "job" can not be " as" somebody"

but this one is idiom because there is no other way to express this idea
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Re: Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Muller began his [#permalink] New post 05 Jan 2014, 03:17
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Spanning more than fifty years, Friedrich Muller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as a Sanskrit scholar and culminated in virtually every honor that European governments and learned societies could bestow.

(A) Muller began his career in an unpromising apprenticeship as

(B) Muller’s career began in an unpromising apprenticeship as

(C) Muller’s career began with the unpromising apprenticeship of being

(D) Muller had begun his career with the unpromising apprenticeship of being

(E) the career of Muller has begun with an unpromising apprenticeship of


Right off the bat i see that A is wrong because "spanning" should not refer to the person muller, but his career, so after 5 seconds A is gone.

B) This sounds right, Im a bit iffy about "career began" and "apprenticeship as" but I definitely keep this as a contender.

C) "with the" sounds weird, "of being" sounds weird, so between B and C, B sounds best but I still keep C as a contender.

D) Again, this makes spanning refer to the person Muller so this is gone in 2 seconds

E) "has" is erroneously in present tense, we notice this if we check to the right of the underlined portion where we find "culminated", which is past tense. E is gone.

Back to B and C. C makes it seem as if a apprenticeship as a Sanskrit scholar by default is unpromising, and if you have a grasp of the intended MEANING of the sentence, you know this is not what the author is trying to say. The author wants to tell us that "his career started off shaky but got a lot better". C is gone and we are left with B.

Notice that I did not eliminate C based on grammatical errors; C does not have any immediate grammatical faults. But you NEED to have a firm understanding of the intended MEANING of the author, and you absolutely have to understand what every option is telling you. This way, you can confidently dismiss C and thus you go with the correct answer: B
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